Everyone thinks they're the hero of their own story. Yet nobody wonders just what its like when you swear you're doing the right thing, that everything you're working for is because you have to do it, yet youre seen as the villain for doing so
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He's like a kitten with a new toy. Paw at it over and over again for nine hours straight, leave the room, and come back to see it again like its brand fucking new.
I know we guys don't always recognize emotions and signals, but good Lord!! The little man with the runway lights is getting fucking tired, just land already!
oh god this is going to be one of those stories where the male lead character is surrounded by potential lovers that all like him, isn't it?
ok, so jeremy did something that is on par with chrysalis and nightmare moon evil.
isnt he just a human? did he eat a fish in sight of ponies or something?
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Believe me, I know. XD Reminds me of a friend of mine who was exactly like this.
Cant wait for the next chapter then if it will be a longer read!
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He looked at Celestia funny.
The italics are perfect for the mental link dialog. It would also let you have two conversations going at once (one verbal, one mental) without much confusion. Or just have our favorite changling make snide remarks that only Jeremy or NM could hear.
Doth I sense shipping?
Well looks like the herd is starting.
I Always love the parts where NMM mane grabs a hold of Jeremy, that's just so cute!
I wonder which way you're going to take the shipping. Love triangle or harem.
We need a big thing to go down! I really hope that all 3 of them get out fine.
Okay so now they talked it out, I am curious as to what follows (or to be more precize how fast it follows). Awesome chap author! Stay golden and I hope the next update follows soon.
Even if he seems a little too clueless, I do really love this story, read it in one sitting on holiday after downloading it, I am very eagerly awaiting future chapters.
Team NMM ftw!
4747204 Your comment reminds me of this.
I wont lie i was a little skeptical about this story.but after reading it im glad i didas it quickly madeit into my favorites.Keep going i love reading this
My Luna, he is hopeless in this regard.
And I swear, if I see that he has problems because "you're a pony" I'm going to smack him so damn silly his whole face will be red...
5217613 Your name being what it is, I'm guessing you support this ship
4747366 He insulted cake in front of Celestia.
Ooh, I see a harem forming. :D
I don't want to be the guy to say this, but this fic is rated M and Jeremy seems to have the mental maturity of an 8 year old hear me out: blindly following halfy without even asking where they are going, then that thing with chrsylis and nightmare moon, I can't help but feel slightly irritated at his mind-set which I feel would be better suited in an E or at least a teen rating
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Blindly following Halfy is self justified as his experiences with non guard pony is that they are good natured, it's not like he was not on guard but that he gave a chance to her to show she was not a bad pony wich was deserving as he has shown not to be pick on who to believe in.
But you are right in the bit with Crys and Nighty, that was too infantile and something to be expected from a teenage than from an adult.