Sometimes, even the best of friends can let you down.
A series of misunderstandings leads to a rift between Derpy and her friends.
Editor: OleGrayMane
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Why is always "Applejack and Rainbow Dash" who did the wrong things?
4036485 Because RD is the element of bitch and Applejack is the element of southern.
Also because they're the Element of Stupid.
I've been asked to edit this by OleGrayMane, and I am yet to spot an error. Thanks for making my job easy!
Characters are way too ooc, I understand that the basic story your trying to tell is that of bad feelings born of misunderstandings and a little thoughtless, but these are established characters.
There's no way they would act as you portray them. Changing their behavior for the same of the plot is not good. This can be remedied by using other side characters that we don't know much about our even OCs. If not this story would need an AU tag.
As is I would have to give this a thumbs down.