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Dartagnen
I have become Death; The Destroyer of Worlds
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Not bad not bad atall
3945575 Thanks.
Huh
A full blooded Flippin' Gorgosaurus in a humanized Equestria.
I like this.
3946769 Glad to hear that.
I like it can't wait for a into poniville chapter I'm nervacitied right now about this. -tank
Of course he finds a dinosaur one but it has potential. -buster
3946981 Indeed.
HAHAHAHAHAHA
3958319 Y r u laughing? :P
KILL THEM ALL PROPHET HAHAHAHA...............Ha
3959986 Oh my.
3959248 the newspaper
This, I like this, here's a moustache
3960372 Oh. Makes sense.
3961878 My moustache! Hisssssss!
Good job good job
I like it I just wish you would post more often.
4021276 Thank you
4021726 Me too. I've been really busy though.
Yes, because as we all know, using lots and lots of swears makes you more mature. Or at least that's what a middle schooler thinks.
Do you know what I miss? I miss flashbacks or peeks into the life of the human protagonist. Another human in Equestria story would've already gotten to these by now and developed the character in a meaningful way that helps us understand his personality and his life. But not this story! No it would rather throw in breasts nuzzling, mindless action and lots of swears.
Please stop trying to appeal to the lowest common denominator in regards to men's power fantasies. We already have somebody who does that. His name is Michael Bay.
4042813 Well, what else would you do if you were a dinosaur, full blooded, and found yourself in a world of strange animals, technology, and not one of your kind found on the world?
Not only that, but if you forget, I lead up to what I want, then see the readers reaction. If you recall, My Little Raptor has a lot to do with the main character. Try to add humor to a man's dull life of prehistory.
Gorgosaurus is about a full blooded dinosaur appearing in a peaceful land full of magic and vegetarians. Being one of the most dangerous animals known to history, he relies on instinct.
He finds himself in a situation with bipedal mammals and strange animals. If I were him, I'd have a similar reaction.
4042941
But this is supposed to be a human in equestria story...and the main protagonist isn't even human. Nor have we even SEEN any humans! It's basically false advertising. Plus the main character's kind of a douchenozzle. How are we supposed to relate to someone with no family, no manners, no moral integrity, no sense of humor and, and this is the big thing, is not even the same species as the other main characters of either the land he's in, nor the AUDIENCE?
4042949 The ponies are the humans. "Fur on their heads" not only that, but ponies are four feet tall, not around six feet. And he's a predatory dinosaur. They had competition with other dinosaurs. Sometimes packs fought for food. Yes, he is a bit of a dick, but if you found yourself in a land where giant reptiles are even more dangerous than you, and mammals, which used to be the size of rats, are now the dominant species on a planet who knows where.
Plus, I'm adding stuff to the new chapter. It may have a few things explaining why Prophet is...well, Prophet.
The typos reallly mess with the connotation
"No one fucks my friends." I warned.
Like this......
4044255 Well, I don't have a editor, and I write stories on my own.
4044260 Whoops!
"Spike spike words..."
4044402 Fixed.
he always got long days
4093221 Indeed.
4095620 yeah he is like " you know ? the other day was normal"
4096294 He always does.
Well thats nature for ya
4176258 Eeyup
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4178104 I laughed so hard when I saw that.
4178104
Must.
Write.
Fanfic.
About picture.
4192826 I'd like to read that soon to be Fic.
This is…interesting so far
4196873 Glad you think so.
4237227 Thank you
4237258 Indeed.
4237269 Not the first time someone expected that.
You dropped a dreaking A-bomb on the fourth wall.
4513302 "We dropped the A-bomb, the H-bomb...and now it's time to drop the F-bomb."
So Gorgosaurus(or Gorgosauri, I suppose would be more grammatically correct) have names ranging from cool ones like Prophet and Gorgon to dull ones like Mary...
Huh.
4513347 The F-bomb?!
YOU MONSTER!! HAVE YOU NO MORALS? COUNTLESS INNOCENTS WIL DIE.
4513359 Indeed.
4513407 You ain't so innocent if you're reading one of my stories.
4513838 ....Crap.