Yes, because as we all know, using lots and lots of swears makes you more mature. Or at least that's what a middle schooler thinks.
Do you know what I miss? I miss flashbacks or peeks into the life of the human protagonist. Another human in Equestria story would've already gotten to these by now and developed the character in a meaningful way that helps us understand his personality and his life. But not this story! No it would rather throw in breasts nuzzling, mindless action and lots of swears.
Please stop trying to appeal to the lowest common denominator in regards to men's power fantasies. We already have somebody who does that. His name is Michael Bay.
4042813 Well, what else would you do if you were a dinosaur, full blooded, and found yourself in a world of strange animals, technology, and not one of your kind found on the world?
Not only that, but if you forget, I lead up to what I want, then see the readers reaction. If you recall, My Little Raptor has a lot to do with the main character. Try to add humor to a man's dull life of prehistory.
Gorgosaurus is about a full blooded dinosaur appearing in a peaceful land full of magic and vegetarians. Being one of the most dangerous animals known to history, he relies on instinct.
He finds himself in a situation with bipedal mammals and strange animals. If I were him, I'd have a similar reaction.
But this is supposed to be a human in equestria story...and the main protagonist isn't even human. Nor have we even SEEN any humans! It's basically false advertising. Plus the main character's kind of a douchenozzle. How are we supposed to relate to someone with no family, no manners, no moral integrity, no sense of humor and, and this is the big thing, is not even the same species as the other main characters of either the land he's in, nor the AUDIENCE?
4042949 The ponies are the humans. "Fur on their heads" not only that, but ponies are four feet tall, not around six feet. And he's a predatory dinosaur. They had competition with other dinosaurs. Sometimes packs fought for food. Yes, he is a bit of a dick, but if you found yourself in a land where giant reptiles are even more dangerous than you, and mammals, which used to be the size of rats, are now the dominant species on a planet who knows where.
Plus, I'm adding stuff to the new chapter. It may have a few things explaining why Prophet is...well, Prophet.
Yes, because as we all know, using lots and lots of swears makes you more mature. Or at least that's what a middle schooler thinks.
Do you know what I miss? I miss flashbacks or peeks into the life of the human protagonist. Another human in Equestria story would've already gotten to these by now and developed the character in a meaningful way that helps us understand his personality and his life. But not this story! No it would rather throw in breasts nuzzling, mindless action and lots of swears.
Please stop trying to appeal to the lowest common denominator in regards to men's power fantasies. We already have somebody who does that. His name is Michael Bay.
4042813 Well, what else would you do if you were a dinosaur, full blooded, and found yourself in a world of strange animals, technology, and not one of your kind found on the world?
Not only that, but if you forget, I lead up to what I want, then see the readers reaction. If you recall, My Little Raptor has a lot to do with the main character. Try to add humor to a man's dull life of prehistory.
Gorgosaurus is about a full blooded dinosaur appearing in a peaceful land full of magic and vegetarians. Being one of the most dangerous animals known to history, he relies on instinct.
He finds himself in a situation with bipedal mammals and strange animals. If I were him, I'd have a similar reaction.
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But this is supposed to be a human in equestria story...and the main protagonist isn't even human. Nor have we even SEEN any humans! It's basically false advertising. Plus the main character's kind of a douchenozzle. How are we supposed to relate to someone with no family, no manners, no moral integrity, no sense of humor and, and this is the big thing, is not even the same species as the other main characters of either the land he's in, nor the AUDIENCE?
4042949 The ponies are the humans. "Fur on their heads" not only that, but ponies are four feet tall, not around six feet. And he's a predatory dinosaur. They had competition with other dinosaurs. Sometimes packs fought for food. Yes, he is a bit of a dick, but if you found yourself in a land where giant reptiles are even more dangerous than you, and mammals, which used to be the size of rats, are now the dominant species on a planet who knows where.
Plus, I'm adding stuff to the new chapter. It may have a few things explaining why Prophet is...well, Prophet.
Oh the ideas going through the dino's head right now
Did anyone else catch a red vs blue reference while reading cause I did and made me laugh a bit
6142479 Thank you! Finally, someone gets it!