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demonbaker
just a brony who got started in the fandom with grimdark
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Very nice for the error riddled story it is. Do continue
3932804 sorry about that, mobius is the one that corrects the grammar not me, i'll fix that in a bit
3933216 if your interested we could use the help to fix those errors, message me if you want to help with the story.
chapter 1 is complete, however it hasn't been edited, after the errors you guys found in the prologue i'm looking for help in spotting and fixing these errors, let me know if you want to help and i'll give you access to the google doc
*sigh* Okay, a werepony would be someone who turns into a horse at night. You don't need everything to be a pony pun. The correct term would still be werewolf even with ponies.
3941946 hm...... you know i hate the term-vampony so i may fix all that, it shouldn't take too much work.
3944779
On another note, your very title is a grammatical error as well. "Mobius's" specifically. When a word ends with an "s" you only need to add an apostrophe with no need of an additional "s" to show it's possessive. The proper title would be "Mobius' Story".
3946752 sure, why not change that too, on it
http://www.google.com/imgres?start=266&biw=960&bih=640&tbm=isch&tbnid=KGU56KQuIYmVKM%3A&imgrefurl=http%3A%2F%2Fponies-n-stuff.tumblr.com%2Fpost%2F59689051866%2Fugh-snickers-memes-ill-let-this-one-slide&docid=zzZTISgoMD2FAM&imgurl=http%3A%2F%2F31.media.tumblr.com%2F4f4572a583e7e374c24ef8c0b1d584bc%2Ftumblr_msawujZPLr1s210hso1_500.png&w=500&h=442&ei=FBkCU_KiKYr90gGn5oCYCg&zoom=1&ved=0CNcBEIQcMEY4yAE&iact=rc&dur=276&page=17&ndsp=18
3959002 holy crap!! i know i haven't released chapters 1,2, and 3 but that image is PERFECT for the story. where did you find it?
To short.
4024027 this story is still being written give it time. i try to update regularly
3961467 I found it on Google images while I was Bored. it fits just right in a pinkarama story. I didn't create the image, but I thank who ever made it.
4056309 thanks for the reply i saved the image to my computer it was just too funny to let go
When can we get to the transformations?
I'm considering doing a complete rewrite of this story. It's been a black spot in my mind for far too long. I hate how it turned out, since Mena is such an interesting and thought out character.
8610765 I look forward to seeing what you come up with. Just the description for this story was so interesting. I do hope it comes out of Hiatus somehow.
es una lastima que este fanfic este en hiatus. era una buena idea y tenia un desarrollo bastante decente y bueno. ¿algún día volverás con nosotros?
se que esta historia no siempre ha tenido tanto apoyo pero aun así, los que la leyeron piensan que es una buena idea e historia. si no te sientes de animo para escribir, esta bien, se comprende perfectamente que esto fue hace mucho tiempo y tenias que avanzar con tu vida. aun asi apreciamos el tiempo que te tomaste en escribir historias.
hasta pronto demonbaker 