chapter 1 is complete, however it hasn't been edited, after the errors you guys found in the prologue i'm looking for help in spotting and fixing these errors, let me know if you want to help and i'll give you access to the google doc
*sigh* Okay, a werepony would be someone who turns into a horse at night. You don't need everything to be a pony pun. The correct term would still be werewolf even with ponies.
3944779 On another note, your very title is a grammatical error as well. "Mobius's" specifically. When a word ends with an "s" you only need to add an apostrophe with no need of an additional "s" to show it's possessive. The proper title would be "Mobius' Story".
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Please continue
Very nice for the error riddled story it is. Do continue
3932804 sorry about that, mobius is the one that corrects the grammar not me, i'll fix that in a bit
3933216 if your interested we could use the help to fix those errors, message me if you want to help with the story.
chapter 1 is complete, however it hasn't been edited, after the errors you guys found in the prologue i'm looking for help in spotting and fixing these errors, let me know if you want to help and i'll give you access to the google doc
*sigh* Okay, a werepony would be someone who turns into a horse at night. You don't need everything to be a pony pun. The correct term would still be werewolf even with ponies.
3941946 hm...... you know i hate the term-vampony so i may fix all that, it shouldn't take too much work.
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On another note, your very title is a grammatical error as well. "Mobius's" specifically. When a word ends with an "s" you only need to add an apostrophe with no need of an additional "s" to show it's possessive. The proper title would be "Mobius' Story".
3946752 sure, why not change that too, on it
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3959002 holy crap!! i know i haven't released chapters 1,2, and 3 but that image is PERFECT for the story. where did you find it?