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demonbaker
just a brony who got started in the fandom with grimdark
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SCP Foundation maybe?
There's a few capitalization errors, but other than that this was good! The premise seemed interesting and pretty dark, reminds me a bit of a story I've had in the works for a while. Nice job!
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if you can highlight those it would be great.
also, Section Three (and the other two too) are supposed to be capitalized.
I am intrigued. I do wish to see more of what you have in mind. There isnt a lot here to critique. I get the sense that you are keeping things specificly vague. So I can’t give advice yet.
damn this is pretty interesting
this is actually really interesting, but question, how old is Twilight?
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oh, right.
it's been about 700 or so years since chapter 1. this is right about where season 1 starts in the show.
Damn, must be my birthday getting a chapter this soon, any chance we could get some lore on the different government divisions and sections in one of the next chapters?
I'm doing a Q&A about section three. The newest chapter is done but waiting a run-through by my editor. For more details go here https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/873202/qa-for-section-three
So what does the Harmony spell actually do?
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I wasn't going to reply to all these the moment I see them, but this is a pretty big miss.
It's the entire basis of why Section Three exists. I feel like a derp.
thanks for askin a question though.
Check your numbers at the end there. Also please continue to write. I am highly intrigued by this story.
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Thank you. Somehow I didn't notice that. combined them together.
With all those dart holes, you need anew dictionary.
Hope for more XD
A thank you to you, and the rats!