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demonbaker


just a brony who got started in the fandom with grimdark

Comments ( 4 )

Im liking this. Having Rainbow be introduced to the operation gives us a venue for lore and exposition.

Long time no see!!!
I love this story. Can we get some more environmental descriptions to lengthen the chapter?
But I love this story so much.

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personally, I've stopped reading descriptions of things when I read a book. I actually caught myself on this chapter and gave a description of Fang.

it's really hampered me. and I need to internalize 'just because I don't read them, doesn't mean others won't.'

bleh.

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:twilightblush:
Its a good way to pad out the length of your chapter and give the reader a sense of grounding.

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