Section Three: The Originals
written by demonbaker
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Long time no see!!!
I love this story. Can we get some more environmental descriptions to lengthen the chapter?
But I love this story so much.
11217398
personally, I've stopped reading descriptions of things when I read a book. I actually caught myself on this chapter and gave a description of Fang.
it's really hampered me. and I need to internalize 'just because I don't read them, doesn't mean others won't.'
bleh.
11217673
Its a good way to pad out the length of your chapter and give the reader a sense of grounding.