When an odd necklace is brought to Equestria, Discord decides to mess with it. It all goes down hill when he breaks the thing, it separates him into his reformed side and his old chaotic side.
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Angle->Angel
Darn and I thought I was doing so good.
Can't help but think brave Sir Dickhead the Knight of Jerkosity bears some blame for this whole incident; if he'd treated Discord the way he would have a powerful unicorn mage who is granted considerable leeway by the Princesses, rather than continually referring to him as an animal and making threats, Discord could have satisfied his curiosity with a reasonable conversation instead of trying to play keepaway with the damn thing. I do hope someone points this out to Sir Jerkface. And also that Chaotic Discord turns him into a lemon-scented sewing machine. And then Reformed Discord pretends not to be able to turn him back once he gets his powers back. (Cause he was never *that* reformed, after all. :-))
The thing about armor that's impervious to magic is, if all of a sudden the air all around you turns into bees, you're going to need to take it off in a hurry. Medieval armor isn't airtight. There are about a zillion ways Chaotic Discord could force Sir Jackhole to take off his armor or else suffer grievous bodily injury ("why, it's not *my* fault it's Poisonous Jumping Spider Mating Season and their favorite spawning grounds are the insides of magical armor..."), at which point the jerkwad who couldn't be bothered to address Discord by name or by anything other than terms referring to animals could find himself becoming a light and fluffy souffle.
Several spelling mistakes, but I like the idea!
AW! Even evil Discord likes Fluttershy!
the necklace reminds me of the Tiger Talisman from Jackie Chan Adventures
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I haven't even thought of that, I just wanted to split Discord. But your right there is a similarity, curse my brain for not making such a rudimentary connection.
3938963 it's ok sometimes people can't find connections like that until someone points it out.
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Yes, well, I'm still mad at myself for it.
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True as you tell it, but I just want to get this story done. Besides I'm just doing this to pass the time in between work and school.
p.s. I do like the input, I would ave never realized that without it, probably, possibly, let us just say maybe.
BWAHAHAHAHA! Screwball's responsible for the extinction of humans!
Wait. 
Why am I laughing?
And Fluttershy! OH NO! Is Evil Discord gonna make him his queen or something?
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TheGrandSpellCaster: I could tell you but that would ruin the supersize.
Justice: ya and it's not like you haven't done that already.
TheGrandSpellCaster: Quiet Justice! No one cares for your two cents.
3939560 two be honest I never have thought you would know about Jackie Chan Adventures
Okay. There are a lot of mistakes, but these are the ones that bother me the most:
"touching"
"bearing"
I think you mean "petals"
Okay, I really love the concepts you have here! And I like how you made Screwball a time traveler, so she can still be Fluttershy and Discord's daughter! And she nearly called Fluttershy "Mom!"
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Consider them fixed.
And consider that a nod to you.
He could have torn the air from the knight's lungs. Why didn't he?
A mortal defeating a major spirit? Sure, and I can move the milky way.
You don't need a spell to work magic.
There is no way a spell that can do that exists.
That knight really has a superiority complex doesn't he?
I think you mean invasion.
What could the flame ponies do? I mean, no that there's like 50 of them, it's kinda important?
500 humans? Well, we would have died out soon anyway. Scientifically, you need at least 5,000 members to continue a species or inbreeding will eventually wipe it out.
3943379 because you are nearly as insane as I.
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Maybe my next story will explain the flame ponies, after all I brought the hippocampus back.
I really like the idea and storyline, but there are dozins of grammar mistakes that you should really try to fix or at least find a proofreader who would help you. But keep it up, it's getting interesting.
Discord isn't a Chimera, he's a Draconequus
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He is both, Draconequus is the name the show gives Discords particular combination of animals. However he is a Chimera, seeing how he is made up of the different parts of different animals.
Aw discord has a huge crush on Fluttershy
Evil discord has a crush??? Why else would he try to turn her chaotic
OH NO! FLUTTERSHY !
This is so cute but screwball almost called flutters mom that is funny
I like this story but where I am now. That night needs more detail, I don't care if he is the best in the army he just faced discord 1v1 and disarmed him. We know canon wise no one can do that and it makes it somewhat awkward as Discord is known for his omnipotence and general lack off fucks given about what feeble mortals do to him.