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QueenOfTheSilence


Nothing to say about me really. All you need to know is I tend to fave and run....and I write crack fics.

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The wedding was suppose to be perfect, pristine. Just how Fluttershy had imagined it, but at this rate it will be anything but that. Her friends are taking over her wedding celebration and one is visibly jealous of all the attention the yellow mare is getting. She also has to deal with an assassin attempting to kill her, her fiances tortured origins and a bunch of other things, will the day turn out alright? Or will it turn into the horrible disaster she knows it's going to become?

Thanks to Assassinmaker for being my proofreader.

Cover image: The cover image is a vector by Skie-Vinyl over on Deviantart. The link is here: http://skie-vinyl.deviantart.com/art/Fluttershy-cowers-down-460584260

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 23 )

Fluttershy just wants to plan her wedding in piece!

peace you mean :twilightsheepish: so far, I'm liking this story. Looking forward to the next chapter :pinkiehappy:

I'm usually not into this here Fru try stuff over weddings, don't get why a large ceremony is a big deal mostly. But I can say all this here conflict can turn out to be a good story. Poor lil fluttershy just wants to have a happy wedding and so far it is not. Discord should really hold back on the pranks it's not getting him anywhere. I liked how he tore rarity a new one over the dress for his bride. Very honorable and hilarious. Mullets are awesome, rarity ain't about that life. I find myself enjoying this more than I'd like to admit, I'd attributed it to all the Hate that is coming off the pages, it's very palpable and palatable to me. Keep up the insanity please, but don't make flutters cry. That's just wrong.that is all.

In all honesty... keep doing the cotton candy hair thing.... its hilarious .. wish I knew pony emotes enough to use them....

what is WITH rarity, jealous or not she's acting like a bitch to poor flutters. just cuz she hasn't found anyone to be happy with doesn't mean her friends also need to be miserable!! amd the rest of the mane 6 should just accept that flutters loves Discord. he's changed and wants to be with her ehat's wrong with that!? i'm especially shocked at pinkie for not accepting it

4839073 Eh I should have mentioned Pinkie, probably fix it later . Pinkie Pie is actually on the fence about the whole thing. While Pinkie Pie is goofy and loves chocolate rain and all that, she doesn't like that Discord betrayed her friends or any of that, but she trusts Fluttershy so she's just keeping it to herself, letting the others deal with the situation.

4842584 well i guess that makes sence. she wants flutters to be happy she's not sure if discord will be the right one for her friend

i can easily say i'm devfenetly curious as to where this plot is going i juast assumed this story was going to be about wedding preperations i'm still quite excited though

4846819 Well ass the synopsis says, there is going to be much more then wedding preparations.

4846857 i really need to read the synopsis more

4846857
hunny,
its *as* not *ass*
youre swearing

4876847 Grammar errors happen on occasion. I'm well aware it should have been as instead of ass.

4931857 Soon! Lol! I've been busy with playing Dragon Age Origins and art stuff, but the next chapter should be up this week.

Fluttershy nodded in understatement.

The word you're looking for is "compliance", since understanding can't be used like that.

4977582 Thanks. :) Fixed that mistake. Lol, I gotta look harder for mistakes. What a lazy individual I have become. :derpyderp2:

7576322 It's on the list of things to redo. Currently I'm trying to keep up with school and I'm working on Dawn of The New Day. I've also severally changed the story. For example, in the revised story there is no assassin or unseen enemy. That wouldn't come along until their oldest daughter is 24. There would still be the problem of Fluttershy's friends not agreeing with her choice of partner but that's another thing. Actually, I just realized, There would still be an assassin but not after her for the original reasons. He/she belongs to a group who thinks she has failed as her duty as an Element of Harmony by choosing to marry Discord. They feel because she is such a revered hero of Equestria along with her friends, ponies would start thinking it was okay to marry a non-pony. Racism for the win! Actually, speciesism! Double yay! [Not really.]

Anyway I do plan to write it all eventually but I still have things to work out in my head besides Bridal Regrets would be one of many in my next gen series. Just for my main character: Fluttershy and Discord overcoming adversary to getting married, the childhood of Aurora and then another one following her and her three friends: Calpso, Chandrea, Vespera followed by maybe another two. It's a long thing.

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