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She's talking with her mouth full : P
*species
There's another error in there somewhere but I've forgotten where the darn thing is.
Awww, love the interaction they have during this chapter. Glad to see they can still have some fun.
Be careful, Gleaming. She's in the madness place. Just be thankful she didn't start Heterodyning.
The alternate title for this chapter: "Everyone stand back, I'm about to do
MagicSCIENCE!"Boy I love your story so far, I wander what other sort treatments Shining will have to go through before it's all over.
How much time is left for him before his due date?
I love how you've portrayed Twilight, and how you've tied in rainbow power. The bond between this family is awesome.
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Gleaming's only like, two months along at most?
... I'm pretty sure that Gleaming is eating FAR too much for how early she is in the pregnancy. And no one would recommend 5 full meals when it's possible to have seven smaller ones instead. First Breakfast, second breakfast, elevenses, luncheon, afternoon tea, dinner, supper, and a midnight snack. Eight easily manageable meals, just like that. Heck, you could prolly slip an additional one in there between luncheon and afternoon tea or between afternoon tea and dinner if you really wanted to.
Hah! Hot Fuzz reference. Nice.
6495766 Are you a hobbit?
I do like the family dynamics here. They're pretty fun.
Could have some fun which some ponies trying to convince Twilight with *ahem* assisting with the batpony population issue. Gotta get that royal backing for the project, after all.
6496933 ... You can't prove anything! YOU'LL NEVER TAKE ME ALIVE! *dives out the window*
Hum.... what do you mean by "Crystal Mirror", the only instance of a Crystal Mirror I can remember... is the interdimensional portal.... which has been moved to Twilight's castle and (depending on how long it is after Season 4 then MAYBE) scienced up. It might not be scienced up yet.... but it definitely got moved to her castle already.
And.... at least one of the foals is definitely going to be an alicorn if Twilight's got a plan for such a case.... (Princess Skyla anyone?)
Is there some reason Cady can't help with the nursing? Part of the curse?
Hello, Commies.
6493911 Twilight as a Spark? I fear for the future of Equestria.
This justs gets better snd better I loveing it all.
This is one of the best, if not THE BEST, ways I have ever seen Cadence, Shining Armor, and Twilight written. Their interactions together feel like they came straight out of the show, because how you wrote them is exactly how they would act in a situation such as this chapter. I'm going to give this chapter 13/10.
Awesome, amazing (awesomazing) work on this chapter!
The Doctor should be coming out again going stop fucking with timE
Thow tencaly it's fucking with space
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6912430 I totally agree with your rating, but it's more like... I dunno,
130,000/10
This is one of my favorite stories I've seen on Fimfiction, and one of the best written as well.
Guess Alicorns need well grounded assistants for a reason after all.
Twilight has Spike, Celestia has Raven and Cadance has Rhex; wonder who is Luna's source of sanity?
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Hyper-cute-doom-filly times four (or more)
...
Awesome story.
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Also,
This whole paragraph needs a few fixes.
Juuust a tad.
I really think that the dialogue in this picture should be reproduced as text in the story itself for accessibility, or failing that, at least in the A/N. For a start, a lot of people read things using a screen reader, which generally can't read the dialogue from images (blogs like We Hunted The Mammoth attain screen-reader compatibility using "associated text", which may not be possible in a story on FiMFiction). Secondly, not everypony reads these stories online, and the images aren't downloaded as part of the document in the site's download options (definitely not in .txt and .html, and those are also the only available formats for individual chapters).
(For those using a screen reader, the dialogue in the picture is "Sit still my love, these spells won't take too much longer. And smile a little! You look so miffed!", and it's implied to be said by Cadance to Shining/Gleaming)
I'm this far in but still have no idea why this is so long