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So Cadence likes the wings? I wonder if Gleam-gleam is aware of that?
6988549 If she isn't yet, she'll be once she ascends or whatever... Or she sees her sweet Eros plowing little dashie while he pushes her into Twilight's budding flower. Or something, still twidash ftw
Suddenly best ship!? Sweet.
So, Shining is gonna turn into an alicorn and stay a female? And now TwiDash?
Two strikes...
Hmm, the chapter starts out with some nice spacing between lines and paragraphs, but suddenly stops doing that for some reason.
Might I suggest that be fixed? The spacing really does make it easier to read.
It's great to see an other chapter of this story again, I can't wait to see all the trouble and grief Nightlight and Velvet will be doing to the royal couple.
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Not sure how that happened, but yeah. It's fixed now.
Hnnng
this whole chapter
10/10
There were quite a few places where you accidentally a word in this chapter, as well as the opposite (two "an"s two "the"s in a row etc), otherwise grammar and spelling were excellent, as usual.
Great chapter, loving the continuous growth of Gleaming's belly, and the clop was fantastic.
I'd be curious to see when some people caught on to the TwiDash. If you've read a ludicrous amount of TwiDash, like myself, you probably caught it the second she stepped off that train. A big hint was Rainbow and Twi's less than subtle "nap" talk. Then again, I suppose some might not have got it til Cady started talking about love. If you didn't catch it til Cadance saw them in an asymmetric lip-lock... well it's probably great that you get to be surprised so often!
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Yeah, I made the mistake of publishing the chap last night without doing edits. Lack of sleep makes you do stupid things. I just went through and cleaned up a lot of it.
Eh, not a TwiDash fan.
Did Rainbow knock up Twilight? Is this what she's trying to hide?
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It won't be focused on much. It's just a sub-plot to give me more to play stuff to play around with.
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I'm not entirely sure where you're getting that Shining is going to turn into an alicorn. Care to explain?
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The meeting with the doctor mare. She said something to the effect that Shining also has the alicorn "gene," and said to, "keep that in mind." To me, that's foreshadowing. The part about him staying a mare is because the story mentioned something about no male alicorns, and also because this is a pregnancy fetish fic first and foremost, so a character wanting to be pregnant all the time just seems to fit.
...I'm sorry, I really don't like TwiDash...I might have to ditch this story...
FUN! FUN! FUN! FUN! FUN! FUN! FUN! FUN! FUN! Oh...no Pinkie. How about a Rainbow Blitz?
Sounds like a Gleaming alicorn is in the offing...??
"Behold Princess Gleaming Shield, the Alicorn of Fecundity!"
If this doesn't happen in the story, I will be very disappointed.
That was a awesome story twilight and Dash should get a spin off fic of how they got together and beyond .That would be a awesome read and I hope that the magic feeding she get get Gleaming further to becoming a alicorn.this was a sweet and awesome read.can't wait to see what happens next.
cadance has the hots for strong winged mares huh,...... head cannon accepted
So let me get this straight, because someone has a personal secret they wish to keep to themselves, a secret that isn't threatening to cause harm to anybody, and you're curious, that gives you the right to violate their privacy just because you have a title and you can.... Cadence I get that you're a fun, mischievous girl but in this instance you were an awful person.
I think you mean a million BITS, right?
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It would seem you are correct on the procedure and I apologise on calling you out on it.
My other point stands, however, I still find it a little off-putting but that is pretty subjective.
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No, just an exceptionally horny pregnant mare.
That's called Trash Talk, i believe
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Hey, at least you have the option of sterilizing your hands with fire afterwards!
Its far to late to bring this up since your not likely to go back and correct it but the proper tittle, or closest thing to it, for a female knight would be Dame, pronounced Dah-may rather then the modern pronoucation of 'dame' (which was an offhand way of saying a prety girl at one point) but dame originaly meant a women of importance and strength who was not otherwise titled iirc, so its the closest a women could ever get to being knighted back in the day without skiping straight past knighthood and becoming a baroness, duchess, or queen
Well, yeah, but you forgot something else.
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