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Well, you have my attention so far. Interested to see where this goes!
So, why not just wait till it dissipates then? This line aside, everything else makes it seem as if the condition is permanent, but it clearly isn't(and is neve stated to be such), but her reactions are as if it is.
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Probably because it might take thousands of years or so to dissipate? That's my guess anyways, and by then Shining Armour probably wouldn't still be around! Cadance might not be either - those Alicorn lifespans are so confusing and inconsistent. It leaves it down to your (or the author's) headcannon.
You have my interest though, author
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Plus it's Sombra we're dealing with...
Hmm. . . looks interesting
Quick note, Shining Armor's magic is pink, and Cadence's magic is light blue.
I love it so fur.
Worse comes to worse getting blasted by the elements would probably fix it... And if this is after they were returned to the tree getting blasted by the friendship beam might also do it. But why would we do it the easy and possibly painful way when we could do it the hilarious and sexy way?
Let the nit-picking begin!
This is missing at least one word. The easiest fix would be to put in a second ‘had’, and maybe add a comma between them, but putting two of the same word in a row doesn't sound very good, so rewriting the sentence would be a better choice. In addition, it's a little odd to term conception as the most basic ability; other things like breathing and eating come to mind. One of the most basic abilities, sure, but the single one? I suppose you could explain that as just being Cadance's mentality on the situation, though.
*the Prince Consort
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Yep. I'm re-reading this.
... boredom, don't catch me now.
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Enjoy! I've been working on Chapter 25 all week. It's looking like I'll be getting out in mid-October or so.
It begins~
Oh god. What is Cadance gonna do to Shiny?