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New chapter? Already finished... Thorax appears? Now waiting for more.
Great chapter.
That nine paragraph long description of their climax. Dang, that's some serious lovin' and I'm lovin' it!
Well now we know there all alicorn power potential came from Nightlight.
Nice to see Thorax and Spike are already getting along just perfectly.
Mangos, the name of Chrysalis's throne… I love all the little things.
So Thorax is a kid here; that's a nice setup for making a friendship with Spike occur more naturally, I like it.
I'm really hoping for gleaming to be stuffed with more foals, especially since thorax can taste how many
Now we're taking care of foals AND lings!
Those two big 🍉 of Gleaming should get much more love , in my opinion. I really like this story, I can hardly wait for more . Keep it up
What happened to the presents that were shown the last chapter?
About Dad Threshold, and Night been "Hulk" did this power was hinted before ? Because it felt out of the blue .
Seat of Hydia? Nice G1 reference there... and might actually explain a few things
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There were several hints dropped about Night Light's abilities, yes. From Chapter 15:
(I do note that this conflicts with Shining telling Luna that Cadance knows, but perhaps she was told in the intervening time…)
And in chapter 16, after Night Light shows up at the guard training grounds:
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You are right, I didn't remember those instances. My bad, I should read everything again
Interesting. In other times such a powerful bloodline would be harnesses and nurtured to generate powerful warriors for the kingdom. Nowadays you just turn them into royals and leave the dad as the Godzilla resort.
While I am enjoying this fic, I feel like Spike is written a bit too young. I've always seen him more with a teenager type maturity while here he seems really child like. Though this might be just me.
I greatly regret not having read and finished reading this sooner.
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You must be quite persistent. I know my writing is quite wordy at times, and I'd benefit a lot from having a pre-reader if I wasn't so impatient, heh. The good ones always want to be meticulous to make sure they're giving solid feedback, and I never can wait that long. RIP.
8348323 Only took me a few binge sessions across a few days, but I actually enjoy the longer stories. I feel bad because I would have loved to follow along with people when you first started had I not let the fic just sit in my 'Read Later' for three years. Incidentally, happy 600 comments.
Nonchalantly using soul magic like it's nothing...
And then afterwards they grumble when normal ponies threat them like goddesses.
Really liked the 'Super' Night Light idea too.
Good work, keep it up.
Are you doing okay??
Will there be any more chapters?? I hope so, because I'm REALLY loving this story!!
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I've been doing edits of Embodiment the past few weeks, and I only started work on Chapter 20 a few days ago. I'd recommend checking out what I've done to Embodiment if you're looking for something extra to read.
That was a awesome. read Ihope all the Chrysalis turn good with the others do.
Requested bug reports:
I'm not aware of a usage of "armada" that means what you want. Legion, maybe?
Did?
Extra 'l'
Aqua regia really
Awwwww, I just want to give him a biology lesson
I am such a nerd
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Aqua regia is nitric and hydrochloric acid.
Same thing we do every night: try to take over the world!