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A very endearing little update, and the freakout just plain perfect.
This reminds me, I do wonder how Twilight is reacting to the fact that her BBBFF is now a mare and carrying her nephews and nieces on top of that.
And spells to change pain to pleasure for the contractions? Good god Gleaming's brain is going to overload.
I suppose 6 would be a bit silly, wouldn't it? 4 is perfect.
"Your Highness, I'm seeing some ... unusual activity in the fetuses."
"WhatI?"
"Well, one of them appears to have already developed its horn, and it REALLY shouldn't be casting magic ye- ... oh my goodness, is that a summoning circle?"
"..."
"Aaaand now there are 9 fetuses in there. I'm not paid enough to deal with this crap."
Four.
So, one earth pony, one unicorn, one pegasus, one crystal pony?
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Ph'nglui mglw'nafh Cthulhu R'lyeh wgah'nagl fhtagn
6459839 She already knows.
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I meant actual interaction in the story. Difference between knowing, and seeing your brother-now-sister in front of your face and pregnant at that.
And then it turns out Twilight is pregnant too Because why not?
But seriously, four kids? Cadance and Shiny are going to face a few sleepless nights.
Heheheheheü, this is just turning from funny and entertaining to comical and absorbing!
Four foals at least, eh? That could mean a lot of things, like as others pointed it out, 1 of each kind! Save for the thestrals.
I really like where the story is going, I really do.
Though... I have a question... how will the foals handle the fact that their mother is their father and their father is their mother? Or... what...
...
This story is quickly turning into one of my favorites.
It just bother me that you say 12 months it a the being of the story for "him" to have the baby (when it could be 7-9 months)
I have a feeling there is going to be a need for a surrogacy spell. Because four may be two much for Shining to handle.
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Earth Equine pregnancies are around a year, so no reason to believe that Equestrian ponies would be too much different.
So many chapters ago I read it this cause of a "Silly Clopfics" mood. But this story is just too great to be considered a "Silly Clopfic", no I am just going to have to slap a "Tasteful Clopfic" on there as I add it to favorites.
6462592 Well then #Blameschool cause I thought it was 7-9 or 10
6462592 RL foals are born developed enough to walk right after being born. If this is not the case for Equestria, the pregnancy could be shorter.
6460012 Just the number two mares can nurse without hired help.
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Maybe, but going by the Cake twins, it doesn't seem too far off. After all they can apparently walk, run, fly, have magic surges, and TALK at three months, whereas human infants take up to a year to get to some of those(not counting the magic or flying of course).
6465271 Maybe it's 10.5 months instead of 11.5 :)
Quadruplets. THINK OF NAMES FOR THE FOALS!
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One, Two, Three, and Four.
Despite some OOC issues here and there, this fic is becoming one of those good 'FEELS clopfics'.
I give this fic four and a half mustaches. x4.5
Three chapters earlier...
Well, you reap what you sow, don't you? So much for thinking your moronic plan through, Princess Fuck-The-Adoption. Proud of yourself? Well, at least I can look forward to Shining giving her a well-deserved...
...or that could happen.
Seriously, is logic or reason ever going to play a part in this? I mean, fair play to Shining for going the "stiff upper lip" route, but this is all because of his wife's cock-up, after she assured him that she'd thought through everything. Why isn't he angry? Upset? Or at the very least, why hasn't his confidence in Operation Foalapalooza been shaken just a little bit?
I think I've figured out what I don't like about this fic; it's too... sitcom-y. This whole plan is a really big deal and one that Cadance and Shining are both taking very seriously, but the way it's presented is just too light-hearted. I'd imagine a revelation like "oops, you're having quadruplets because of your wife's cock-up with her fertility spell" would create even the tiniest amount of friction between Shining and Cadance. Something like, I don't know, a screaming match or something. But no, once again we get the "hug it out" scenario.
Maybe that "happy joy joy stuff" is the mood this fic is trying to go for in the first place, in which case, more fool me. But this... this just doesn't do it for me. Sorry.
6480072 I agree with you, and i am enjoying it. So I have no problems with it despite any minor problems.
Why do I get the feeling that by the time this is over, Gleaming isn't going to be changing back, even she still wanted too.
6460039 Oh goddess my sides are in orbit! Thankfully I am the only one awake right now because that have me rolling.
OMG OMG OMG OMGFOUR BABYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!This is so awesome I hope it's to of each two boys and two girls.
Wtf is with this ultrasound???????
If you entered the womb you'd have such a high chance of causing a miscarriage it is not even funny. No offense but you are clearly clueless on this procedure and it makes it painful to read, especially when you sexualise it with moaning and words like 'slit'
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What's being described in this chapter is called a transvaginal ultrasound. It's usually the first real scan in a pregnancy, done around the twelve week mark to check for various things, including multiples. Because the fetus is so small at this point, the best way to see it is to insert the transducer wand into the vagina, press it gently against the cervix, and let the ultrasound waves pass through the mother's internal organs.
Nowhere in the text does it say that the transducer wand actually enters the uterus. The wand enters the vagina, which is the elastic, muscular canal that connects the uterus to the outside world. It is then placed gently against the cervix, a cylinder-shaped "neck" of tissue that serves as the gateway to the uterus. When a woman is pregnant, the cervix is tightly sealed until the fetus is fully gestated.
I can assure you I did my homework on this before writing about it.
I finally found the image I wanted to post on this chapter.
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And suddenly... gleaming dies like your mother in fallout 3 :3
“I just hope one of you is a boy.”
God: No you only get girls
Their names will be First Blush, Second Wind, Third Strike, and... uh, Fourth Detonator?
Good things Alicorns are really long lived, otherwise there would be some succession problems in the Empire's future.
7853252 i think in that way its the first to be out of the womb
I get the feeling that at the end of this story, when their foals are born, Twilight's going to have a "duh" moment when she realizes that she and her friends could simply hit Cadance with the Elements of Harmony to cleanse her of the dark curse... Or perhaps use them on the Crystal Heart to cleanse Cadance AND the Crystal Empire both of Sombra's lingering magic.
Then, of course, the horseshoe would be on the other hoof when Shining gets to have his revenge...
One of my OCs has a similar tell. If there's something that she can contribute to a conversation that... let's say.... wouldn't ease things, she reflexively puffs up her cheeks, as if trying to hold back whatever she's thinking of. Ergo, she's a rather transparent liar,
Even by the artwork you could tell that she gonna have quadruples. It's nice when there is fitting artwork for a story
Hey four's not bad for the first time. Im sure she can do better next round.
I mean they got a very big castle to fill.
To quote Hades from Hercules,