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Definitely looking forward to what will be in store! Hope to see more from ya pretty soon!
Oooh! the doc has The Stare!
Ah! Title drop!
Zephyr Breeze? Lightning Dust?
Nobody we've ever heard of before.
It's official: Gleaming is now the Incredible Bulk. Or has it, at least.
Hehe, now this was the update, and certainly looking forward to the hijinks that are going to happen figuring stuff out!
Lovely fun with talia and the look of doom!
*disappointed horse noises*
Are we ever going to find out what the heck is in Night Light's present, or are you just being a tease?
*rimshot*
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I now want to see that oh so much
The puns, the jokes, the references! I do love this story for a reason. The porn is quite good, too
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It may or may not come up in a future chapter.
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I know you're talking about the mysterious
exotic matterpresent, but that doesn't stop me from pretending you're referring to the other thing.Real quick
*gamut, although Twilight's Gambit sounds like a great fic title. There was also a place place where you added extras of stuff stuff, but I totally lost it, sorry.
Okay, that all done.
This is totally awesome!
I've always been fascinated by the idea of additional-pregnancy, both from a fetish standpoint and a fiction standpoint, and this hit that right home. I'm a little disappointed with my own genre-savviness that I didn't catch when the fifth child was conceived, it seems so obvious now in hindsight!
I absolutely love how you're making this whole thing a part of Gleaming's self-discovery. As a future-parent, as a sexually-fluid (in a whole big bunch of ways) individual, and as a future Alicorn. A lot of authors would have taken the easy way out and just been like "Bam, she's an Alicorn now" either during/after labor or something. I hope all the extra effort feels worth it to you, because I haven't seen it yet and I can already tell you it will be.
I don't mean to denigrate anyone, but the front page has been inundated with a lot of fics that are great concepts, that just aren't executed very well, or have no real interesting story... Fecundity is leagues ahead of all of them for taking that interesting concept, and turning it into a legitimate piece of fiction.
Can't wait for the beginning of Part 3!
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Thanks, man! I'm glad you're enjoying the approach I'm taking to this. I'm working on chapter 19 next, so hopefully you won't have to wait THAT long.
You know, I'm not into the fetish of this at all, so congratulations on doing such neat worldbuilding around it that I'm hooked for the story!
Awesome chapter, can't wait for more and to find out what is Gleaming's domain, great work.
Also:
Loved the reference!
so will Shiny get even more pregnant? go for a full dozen?
I love this story so much.
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This was a common criticism of the chapter when it was first published. It wasn't my intent to portray Cadance like that. In later chapters, I tried to show their relationship as more balanced.
Interesting that Twi never really uses this though
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I don't see it as a problem. Cadance worked really hard to find this solution so she's not in the mood for Shining whining about not wanting it. Especially since there isn't another solution. I understand why she would get frustrated with him putting out such weak counter-arguments.
It does indicate her being quite dominant over him but not really abusive.
That was awesome read just awesome.Ijust can't stop reading it it's just that good.
Fun with time travel:
It's fine, Gleamy. Cady's gonna time-travel back when the curse is over, she remembers all this, her magic and reproduction works just fine. You can do absolutely anything because it's already written that Cady will be fine. It might have inconvenient side-effects, but it can't do any lasting damage, because it didn't do any lasting damage.
Requested bug reports:
Her?
Mention; about?
Correct (under archaic rules) but unusual-looking. Suspected/expected, maybe?