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What a minute, that changeling...
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I detect many cute and feelsy bugpone times in the future.
Huh, well, bleep... This was something else, and ouch on cadence kickstarting her fanclub in a very different way.
Hahaha, they're gonna fuck Thorax. Then get him preggers. Then fuck him again.
Don't sweat, little buddy, Cady'n'Gleamy's Feeder/Breeder Fetish Club is gonna treat you riiiiiiiiight.
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This is quite possibly my favorite comment on the story so far.
Issit Thorax? yaaaay, cuddlebug!
Hmmm! So all the newborn bat ponies get a fake puppy?
isn't
sending
Uh oh. This will end unfortunately for somepony.
complement, in this context.
See above.
Great to see an other chapter it was very interesting chapter, but I though that Shining Armor immortal, in the first chapter?
Sweet, so now Shining has the change to ascend into a Alicorn, just hope he returns to male form to ascend then so he can be an Alicorn STALLION, and now we have Thorax that was taken into protective custody back to Canterlot, of course it would have been cool to see what would have happened if he absorbed a small amount of love energy from the Crystal Heart, maybe he could have turned into a Crystal Changeling then, that would be cool to see.
Oh my god I laughed for a few straight minutes at that.
8070503 That comment was perfection.
Needs a chapter about Cadance getting fucked with a rake.
lol good job
Somepony has a fetish~
Yaaay, impending Thorax! Best buggu ^,,^
Big Mac may be a stallion of few words, but when he does speak, everypony listens.
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I would like to apologise for my previous statement, and its erroneous content.
They're gonna bang him, knock him up, stuff him so full of love he is literally spherical, THEN fuck him again.
I apologise to anyone I misled.
I'm not feeling this chapter. I get that Gleaming has a lot of hormones, but the sex scene kinda came out of nowhere for me. I mean, who is this guy? Unless there was some expanded material I was made unaware of, he just seems to be inserted into the story to get a sex scene. LunaMac is an interesting way to go, and I'm glad that apparently Thorax is going to show up, but this chapter isn't doing it for me, TBH.
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I suggest you go back and re-read The Peers part 1 and 2.
8072735 I stand corrected, but in my defence, that was over a year and a half ago.
My favorite line, followed closely by the fuck me with a rake from Cadance. Can't wait for some Thorax action.
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My personal favorite.
They are, by marriage, as royal as the ruling sisters. When Gleaming ascends, it will be MORE. How the hell aren't they very high?!?
Sure, she probably means before, but details
8072469 queen Thorax, birthing Crystal cuddlebugs since Caddie decided to go Eros on his chitinous plot
Great story so far. I can't wait for more chapters. This is one of my favorite stories.
i actually like the old cover better
what happened to that one?
Great chapter! And I love that last line, I nearly choked on my tea!
ha
If Celestia joins the club, I hope Twilight isn't far behind. I wanna see how naughty you make her during a pregnancy.
I liked previous illustrations more.
Nice chappy
Habiterr Klamnei!Great preg-sex and world building as per usual! I thought the Thestrals having parallels of the other races instead of all being "pegasi" was particularly interesting, and is totally unique in my own fimfic reading experience.
That dramatic turn with Cadance's insecurity regarding Gleaming's mortality was really touching, and all the more so by juxtaposing it with her soul sight straight up putting Big Mac's and Luna's side by side.
I have one negative for this chapter and it's 100% site format related. I have sensitive eyes and read in Dark style with Twilight (the program not the pony) up quite high and something happened with the formatting after about the halfway point. Might have something to do with superscript because it happened right after the first trademark symbol. Anyway, whatever happened made the text completely invisible to me. Basically the same for any Dark or dark-ish formatting.
It's perfectly readable with any format with black text on bright background, just hard to look at (for me).
Not a super high priority by any stretch of the imagination, but maybe something to look at when you have a minute.
Last I checked females don t havr adam's apples
Finally caught up on reading this, having stopped about halfway through after catching it when the first chapter was published. Goddamn, how do you mix such a good story with such an excellent depiction of some of my favourite kinks? And now it looks like thorax is getting in on it all. I eagerly await more.
Considering how hilarious Vinyl is as a mute troll, I'd love to see how frazzled she could make Octavia if she could talk.
Wow this. was a interesting read I hope 1 Big Mac can become immortal to,2 Ihooe Chrysalis can be turned not only good but joins Gleaming and Cadances. herd.this just keeps getting better and better each chapter.
*looks up reidite*
Ooh, that colt is really gonna pack a wallop.
Requested bug reports:
This looks like butt with some of the default emoji sets. Seriously, it's in Comic Sans over here. Can we use the superscript function instead, like so:
Princess SmileTM
Also here.
Not sure what that dot's about.
This seems ungrammatical and I'm not entirely sure how it's meant to flow.
I think you accidentally a word.
Nitpick: unless it's a plot point for this story, according to the official lore and what Elements we see each use in flashbacks, Luna wielded Laughter, Loyalty and Honesty.
won't?
This feels like it should be in italics and/or quotation marks, or something.
drones'
Vinyl being mute, a really strange idea
It wouldn't surprise me if it is actually true
Or fucked by a princess
I love this story
To quote an old song,