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Been building up to this for a long time. Feels good, mang.
I'll be moving this weekend and needing to get settled. After that, I'll be splitting my writing efforts between the epilogue for Hybrid, and a one-shot for nsfwbonbon, who drew up the purdy new cover art. Once I've got those two things done, I'll be working on part 2 of this.
Superfetation? It's my guess, anyway.
Oh wow, and huh. Now this is going to be something else in the morning for shocks and surprises. A lovely update, and great little cliffhanger to pause on.
Having an orgasm= +1foal?
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Also, spotted this.
Perhaps guidebook would be a better fit?
EEEheeheehee! This hits all of my buttons! I love this story!
She IS a black-belt in Karate, though, to be fair.
Pregnant belly kissing and navel sucking combined has to be one of the hottest damn combos around.
I sat down yesterday like, "I hope fecundity updates soon"
I am happy with these results.
To this point I've enjoyed the story but seriously its Jumped the Shark as the they call it in TV terms. Three foals is pushing it generally single or double births are common for equines. As it stands Gleaming will need a wet nurse to help feed them all. 6 thats just getting SILLY
8177196 It's a fetish story man, reality has nothing to do with it.
8177196 How have you gotten this far and not realized the story is partly a pregnancy fetish fic?
Another great chapter one again. I wonder if this next foal is going to be an other alicorn but this time a male, which would defy the theory that there can only be mare alicorn. One thing that I am surprised that Shining hasn't considerer for an argument of returning into a stallion is that the foals would still need a male role model to follow that they can look up too and emulate? I know that that both sexes need that sense of direction that they can take not just boys and they need it to be a more well rounded person with them to guide them in life as a source of strength and principles. I don't think Shining would let Spike and Nightlight assume the role of the male figure in there lives and he would like to take serve that role too, at least before he start to forget what it is to be a stallion. Can't wait to see what will happen next
Equestria, we have a problem.
At this rate, they could make Chrysalis feed inadequate as a breeder.
8177458 Chrysasad XD
Great story so far. This is striking so many of my chords, it's unbelivable. Keep it up
Well shit. Sextuplits. Did not see that cuming
Hopefully gleamy can hold many more
If things keep up like this she won't see straight for a week after birthing. You know, with the pain to pleasure spell and stuff
*squeals* I CAN'T TAKE IT THIS FIC IS FANTASTIC AND JUST TOO MUCH BUT IN A GOOD WAY!!!!
HOLY SHIT.
OMG this chapter was so sweet and funny ,It just keeps getting better and better I keep loving it more and more each chapter.I can't wait to see how everyone reacts when they find out it's six in her belly now.
Given the quantity of effort you put into this, I elected to give this a read. So far, the story had been more than entertaining. However, in this chapter, I noticed that Gleaming eats French onion soup. Is it imported from the human world?
Requested bug reports:
Drop the apostrophe for "dos".
Defer, perhaps?
This is ambiguous. If you're referring to how the magic itself changes its own form, it's OK. If you meant how it changes rocks, it should say "how shadow magic metamorphosizes rocks is worth it." Or you could say "how shadow magic metamorphoses form" if you don't want to specify rocks.
Not sure that's quite what you're aiming for, and it makes the phrasing awkward. Vulnerabilities, perhaps?
Extra line break
Prench? You used that above.