Welcome back!

Holy shit it’s alive

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I'm not in my grave yet.

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greatest quote ever lol

This is great! Azrael let go of his hold on this fic. Good to see it back.

Damn, I had just finished the grave for this story. Guess it will be vacant for some time

And thus, this song shalt be played when justice is being rendered unto the tyrannical quadrupeds!

Huh, it's not dead.

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I've had some things to deal with, it's not been a good four years

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Understandable, fuck ton has happened to me over the year, barely have time to write anymore. Glad to see you managed.

I have some things to say. First the good. That actions scene was great! It was exiting and had my heart pumping along with Cyphers! Oh, and you are back so that is a great thing too .

The bad thing is the old concern about "show don't tell". You do mostly a good job but for example when Shining is flying to Cyphers location there is too much exposition and that makes it boring. Instead, what information do I need to know in order to understand what is happening?

I appreciate your currently weakened state, but we haven't any time. Cypher, enemies are coming.

Appreciate? Is that the right word?

Dang, never thought I would see this updated!

So is the Ark still destroyed in the rewrite?
Plus what exactly happened to Earth

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1. Yes, but the hulk is vast enough that some portions continue to function
2. Lost and forgotten save for legends of the first garden

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So I guess taking humanity and leaving the planet is out of the question

Let me just say, thank you for this story.

First, your absence has surely made the heart grow fonder; time has only enhanced your writing, so never stop writing. Please? Second, your lengthy abscess has made reading this chapter akin to leaping into the abyss, but I must say there were screams of delight as I plummeted fearlessly. Amazing, not many can pick up right where they left off, be warned of inconsistencies but shocked to find I can seamlessly continue the story within my mind. I'm definitely gonna re read this just to help cement the setting better. I can hardly wait to start!

Thank you, and have a pleasant day.

Post script, just wanted to say, I kinda discontinued watching the show myself, but I still watch a few new episodes just because. Your season one and older fandom knowledge, however, will turn no readers from your tale.

I have to ask why I take so long to write a new chapter and can by chance we get a new one I just start reading the story recently but I could tell the story has great potential I think you should come back to the story and move forward with it

it lives!!!!
can't wait for the next chapter

Can’t wait for more!

2014

Dont tell me your in hiatus again :'(

Will the story continue its too good to die