• Member Since 25th Apr, 2012
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Erol carstein


Just a guy with time on his hands really, all I can say is a hope you enjoy what I write

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Is this a repost? Because I've read this before...

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It is unfortunately. :fluttershyouch: I had to delete the previous iteration.

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Well, I suggest another edit run. Spotted a lot of little errors.

Still, happy to see it back, hoping for that inevitably awesome sequel with a very happy Celestia :trollestia:

:rainbowkiss:Here's hoping Celestia gets some of him in the future. She deserves it.

Good story. I did find a fair amount of grammatical errors though.

That last paragraph. :)

that was a great chapter i liked your story:twilightsmile:

I know understand the dark and alternate universe tags now. This story was what would have happened if the Elements failed to save Princess Luna and ended up either dead or extremely weakened. Very creative:twilightsmile:

That was pretty too but could use more character dialogue and a little less detail of the senory.

Hmmmm.

SEEKWAL!! NAO!! :trollestia::pinkiecrazy:

.......plez? :yay:

Can't see first chapter.

It's a bit difficult to start a series when the first story has only the epilogue left...

D-F

the Elements were treasures of the state, assets that could not be deployed lightly.

the most ive watched of the show is through the scooterix abridged series, but even i know that is absolute bullshit
*cough* the dragon *cough*

THAT IS ONE...LUCKY...STALLION !!!!!

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