Please for the love of god, let the humans kick some pony ass and not lose at the end like the other fics I've read.

Question, why are there so many dislikes?

EDIT: Well that was an awesome prologue. Have all my likes and favourites.

Physique, not physic, and humanity's, not humanities.

3922847 probably religious reasons.

I love your concept. You have a lot to work with here, and I can't wait for you to update. This is gonna be awesome!

This sounds pretty damn good. You could stand to get a better editor, but really I can only find a few minor things. That, and your protagonist's name is Cypher? Really? But on the whole, I like it.

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Sci-fi mythology, like Marvel's Thor or Too Human. Both use words from both genre effectively. Though Thor's comics lean a little more towards myth and Too Human leans more towards Sci-Fi. It's all about how the world is crafted.

There is no "this isn't right in this story". There is only an author's failed execution.

How in the heck did I miss this story? This is just what I wanted to read!

Gave it a look, even though... hate fics with "evil ponies." This site is called "fimfiction," and I guess most people know what the first three letters stand for.

It really looks like you put some effort into this. Great word variety... just not something I'd read. Didn't vote on it because I didn't really read it.

Perhaps this story will save you my wrath, perhaps you will fall like all the others who attempt such a story.

You have my attention, for now...

Of the exact outcome, it is not mentioned, though one need simply look about themselves to discover humanities fate.

humanity's

The one who shall bring humanities salvation.

Again, humanity's.

the humans knowledge is incredibly vague.

humans'

But still, it would seem this uncertainty doesn't dampen humanities spirit,

Also humanity's.

Rather repetitive errors. But anyway, I like the sound of this. Very intriguing.

Please let Cypher win!

A Technogod as the ultimate savior of humanity, saving them form the servitude of the Heavanly Sisters? This is gonna get existential isn't it.

3919244 I would genuinely love to know what fics those were.

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so do i