I have two sides to me.. choose wisely. I love evrypony!!! <3333333
In everypony there is a darkside to tell... some do anything to hide it and others can't hide it. after a walk in the everfree forest from zecoras leaves rainbow dash to show the true side of herself towards her friends. will anypony be alive after rainbow dash's secret is revealed...
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The 'were' translates to man. Therefore, 'werepony' is only accurate if it's person that transform into a pony and back.
i'll be your proofreader :3
now saying that your 15 is not really an excuse, I'm 15. what you really need is either an editor or a proof reader, coz dayum this story has a lot of mistakes. Oh and use Microsoft word if you can, should help with most of the spelling and grammar errors.
3881809 isn't Lycan the correct term?
God did no teacher ever teach you about capitalising names? Also with your speach marks:
"There needs to be a capital at the begining if the last sentence nded with a full stop, there also needs to be either a full stop, a comma, exclamation mark or question mark before the last speech mark."
Your school must be failing you, its ever th studets fault for being bad, only the teachers for ot beig able to teach them. so yeah not saying your useless or anything....
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Except that 'Lycan' is taken from 'Lycanthrope', in which 'anthrope' translates to 'man'
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And being a little hypocritical, ain'tcha?
SHIT did they say "again" that's not good
awesome, I'll be waiting for the next
great as I want to read next
thank you so much rewii rising ^_^ that means so much
holy shit..........
great, but take too long to upload chapters
Fuck Pinkie pie and Rarity are leses
shit
3968098 sorry....
3971709 sorry? why?
nert derpeee!!!!
great but are very short not it
4107953 sorry i was rushing to finish it last night cause i haven't had a chance to write in a while next chapter will be longer ;)
this is so a twidash moment...i love this part....
4135291 thank u!!! lol
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i wuv it
The ending made no sense what so ever. Good story, many spelling errors, and a nonsense ending. Not the best story, but good enough.
4174296 thanks
ending was a little confusing haha
Wait what fluttershy is out of character she barely is able to stop her blush.and out of no where she kissing every pony it's just wierd. I can't see Fluttershy kissing every pony I just can't 0-0
4175681 I-I..... uhhhhhhhh..... plot twist
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Eyup now I can see this happening. O and one more thing FLUTTERDASH NO
TWIDASH:3 Because ashy and Dash have been though lots of stuff together alone. Most of the time I can see this happeninglol what the fuck just happend
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Actually, no, 'were' does translate to 'man'.
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It would be werepony if something non-pony would turn into a pony at full moon.
But in that case a pony turns into a were-"wolf".
The last word describes the animal in that a human or pony turns in, not what it usualy is.
Ok, first thing.
Copy the story into a word document and use spellcheck.
Second,
How did they have pups? Is Rainbow a guy in wolf form?
5545877 bad writer i am huh
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Ironically I did enjoy the story
However there were too many spots I had to read what you wrote and translate it into what you meant to say.
A lot of the errors could be fixed with a simple spell check
5660844 awww thank you im glad you enjoy my story
that means alot to me i promise you i will practice on my writing i'll improve
That was a but of a sucky ending. Cause new villain comes around, no Elements to kill him or her.
it sucks
What the fuck just happened?
It's all too fast for me!
ADORABLE
so she hesitated to kill her other friends but not AJ? come to think about it nobody seems as shaken as they should be that Applejack AKA the element of honesty is dead.
Dafuq is going on?
Sorry. But without the correct punctuation, spelling, spacing, ect, it is VERY hard for me to understand what is happening.
Okay, in all honesty, this has potential. Correct spelling and grammar go a long way though.
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Aaron lycan...