Scootaloo has lived her life out in Ponyville, getting her cutie mark and being the town Mailmare, seemingly stuck in a rut for years. Sweetie Bell has been gone for nearly a year now, becoming a popular singer for "The Bells." One day Scootaloo gets a letter from her old friend saying that she's coming home for a visit...
Written from the perspective of Scootaloo somewhere around ten years in the future, this is my entry for the ScootaBelle contest: We got Our Cutie Marks!... Now What?
Edit: It won the contest!
Read, Comment, Enjoy!
-MasterFrasca99
Chapters (1)
Nice job! Very sweet!
3795597 Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
The d'awws!
A well done little Scootabelle story! <3
I don't normally read a lot of "New Stories" stories, but I'm glad I did! This was a sweet little gem and I hope it gets some well-deserved attention.
A few editing notes, though...
^I think "I", probably
Alright, with one l. And the sentence kinda ends, I'm not sure if it was supposed to trail off or get interrupted by Sweetie's next line, but it's there.
I believe no "a"?
This one's more minor, but I think Me can be capitalized in the song title.
missing e at the end of Belle, and capitalize Drew.
It's missing an endquote.
stared intently, perhaps?
The quotes break off, but it seems like he's still speaking?
Anyways, loved it. Hope these edits help!
Very sweet!
>"The Bells"
I think that Scootaloo and Sweetie should make a band called Scootaloo and the Sweeties.
I've been meaning to give Scootabelle a try. So congratulations because you actually got my attention. This was a very good read, short and sweet.
Judgement pending.
~Skeeter The Lurker
This was a cute little story.
3796025 Thank you a million for those pointers. I cannot believe I screwed up that scene that badly. Everything is fixed.
3796426 Well, I may just have to write this now.
3797037 I know you enjoyed it Skeets. I can see it in your eyes, the eyes that are hidden behind the code...
3797652
I did indeed!
In fact... I already have a decision in mind for this one...
~Skeeter The Lurker
I only have one thing to say,
http://lunachan.net/pony/src/136855296935.jpg
I'm not sure what it is about one shots I like so much but this is easily getting my like and favorite, good job and I hope to see more in the future.
very good story hits you right in the heart plus i love about any story that has scoots in it
Great job. The first Scootabelle I've read, and this ship has a great start on me. Are there any sequels in the works?
3801312 As this is a one shot, I feel that a sequel would only degrade the original, so I don't have a sequel in mind. Also I have a few other projects I'm working on currently, so I'd like to see those finished first. If you would like to write a sequel, then have at it. I'm just not sure how one would go about doing it.
I don't think that I'm comfortable using your idea for a sequel. It sorta feels like stealing.
Ponies don't have chins -_-
3805144 You caught me, they don't. However, I don't think holding Sweetie's "Chin Groove" would have been as romantic.
This was so sweet and enjoyable to.
(Not that my ratings means anything 
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Nothing to bad about it just a cute and short heartwarming story good job 9/10
For some reason, Sweetie's voice inside my head sang the music in Digital Love by Daft Punk's rhythm
So cute >w< this story is awesome! Thumbs up for you
4291138 Thanks! That's an interesting take on the lyrics. When I wrote them up I actually imagined a very slow and very vocal take on it. I like how well it works, though.
Doctor Whooves Reference...FOR THE WIN!
but... but... but... I want more!!!!! gimme gimme gimme a sacond chapter!!!!!
Apparently it’s hard for the mailman in my town, he can’t even get the Mail in the right mailboxes in my apartment building 🤦🏼♀️