Occasionally, I write things. I have to admit I'm pretty bad at it. Occasionally, I edit things. Same story there really.
Luna had known for a long time that this one day would eventually come, and now she is going to pay her respects to a few friends from the past.
This is a one-shot fiction written from Luna's perspective. Criticism is accepted and encouraged.
Read, Comment, Enjoy!
-MasterFrasca99
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I didnt cry through this whole thing...... then at the end no many tears were shed..... I cried like a bitch
Such an emotional and well written story. Great job!
Also, I feel sorry for your loss. I know it's a tough time to go through and I wish you well.
2034414 Then I have done well.
2034420 Thanks for the kind words, Prawject.
Quite a nice fic.......very well written.
The only downfall, please pardon me, is the lack of description for the ambiances around the tombstones, but I suppose this is a highly subjective opinion. Nicely done..........
This...gave me so many feels for my face but this is one of the best stories i have read. Very well done.
Also i give you my best feels for your dog. If anything were to happen to my pets i would be heart broken.
Author's Note:
May your dog R.I.P and Im sorry for your loss
Respect for how well you pulled this off. Even though I had steeled myself against it, knowing what was coming, I still managed a tear once she reached the last grave. That quote... there was nothing more perfect. I never usually read sad stories, but... well, I can tell that this is a good one. Many condolences for your loss, I own a few pets myself, and... damn... I just got the connection
*claps loudly as i cry* bravo saddest story i have read since my little dashie good job
Ouch, right in the feels
While I may not have shed a tear, I do know the message this was trying to get across.
Been to enough funerals for THAT.
Well done, mate. Well done.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Talked it over with a few of the admins.
Approved for Twilight's Library.
~Skeeter The Lurker
3534293 Woo! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the kind words.
beautiful story. As someone who's almost lost more people dear to me than i can count on two hands, I'll say that i teared up from the feels
3822847 Thanks! Glad to have moved you.