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Pinkie Pie is dead. After a three week battle with an incurable disease, she finally passed away in her sleep. Now at the funeral, her five best friends are going to tell the story of the party pony's last days.
Rated Teen to be safe.
Thanks to damandust11 for making sure this story is at least somewhat readable.
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Holy shit that is really good!!!!!!!
So this disease Pinkie Pie has is eating her from the inside out in a way? Sounds a bit harsh.
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This story so far is AMAZING but one problem. Ponies wouldn't know either of those songs
Is it still gonna be updating?
This one seems a bit less heavy on the drama and feels compared to the others. I guess Pinkie Pie used up her sorrow on her other friends.
4081446 You're right, but I don't think there's a pony equivalent of them. If there is, please tell me, I'd like to fix that, if possible.
4081463 Yes, there are still two more chapters left.
4081524 Kind of, as the Element of Laughter, she doesn't want her friends to be sad, that's why she's putting on a brave face and still being Pinkie.
It must be so hard for Applejack to lose her "cousin" after only recently discovering who she was.
It's always sad to lose someone close to you, even when you know it's coming.
R.I.P Pinkie Pie, you will be missed.
What kind of disease does she even have?! It sounds horrible!
4855899 I recently lost the dog that was in my family since before I was born...
We knew she was old, but we swear she had nine lives. She outlived her welcome, I guess...
Sad yet somehow relieving!
ok my friend, i have downloaded the story to my flashdrive, gonna read it
Well, today feels like a good day to cry.
And so far, you are setting up the foundations for one heck of a flood.
You heart wrenching jerk
You did a good job with the mood throughout so far. I'm beginning to shed liquid feels over here.
Now, recently I was bit by an editor, so I feel compelled to point out a few things:
You have two instances of italics that aren't working.
Pinkie and I
The decline of Pinkie's health reflecting in her appearance and energy really just shot me in my feels.
Dammit, I love a good sad story.
Little edits for improvement:
Missing opening quotation mark.
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5649600 Thanks for catching those, I'll make sure to fix that.
Damn it. So sad. This is so sad.
Two things:
Pinkie needs to be capitalized and there is some missing text.
Poor choice of words, AJ
Aw, darn it all. I'm crying.
Hey, I've been reading this on my phone. Is there some missing dialogue at this part?
This was a very good short tale for manipulating some feels. Yes, I said manipulate. I get cravings for sad fics time-to-time, and I'm not exactly sure why. So I dig up a story built to give me that sad feeling I'm looking for. This one did a good job.
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Just like he said, this story is sad because of the focus on the good Pinkie gave during her final weeks despite her condition. She was selfless to the end, and that was really touching.
I've read some boo-hoo, woe-is-me crap, and I'm glad to report this wasn't one of them.
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I think I've read a quote somewhere about you haven't lived a day until smiled, laughed, cried, and be scared.
5649977 Yeah, I guess I must of deleted that part by accident. Glad you liked the story, and thanks for catching those errors for me.
When I finished reading this, my pillow was soaked and I'm still crying as I write this. As pinkie would probably say "Never stop laughing" Rip, Pinkie, beloved friend, foal sitter, daughter, sister, element of laughter, and savor of Equestia. That's what her headstone should say. I dang it, I'm still crying!
long live the spirit of laughter!
And who ever is being a troll needs to pay! This may be sad, but this so heartwarming that it's too heartwarming to say dislike!
The feels are real
