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Gandalf158


Unfortunately, no longer gonna be writing here anymore. Sorry to anyone who wanted to see my stuff get finished, and a massive thank you to everyone who read my stuff.

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Wilfred Mott knocked four times, but the Doctor didn't die. He simply regenerated into a strange new form and blasted the TARDIS into a dimension full of strange, talking ponies. Now the Doctor has to come to grips with his new body, as well as saving this new universe, and picks up a couple of friends along the way.

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FIRST...

To say this looks like it's gonna be a brill story

Aww shit bro, the autons be back and I've got a feeling that ol' nesty's back as well

5355221 Sorry bro, I went with another classic enemy to control them...

Edit: Thanks for the favorite!

It's pretty good. Except for the fact that this story shares many traits with other Doctor Whooves stories written before on this website.

Autons have been used in this fic.

Octavia and Vinyl have been used in several Doctor Whooves stories, almost always companions.

And the Doctor regenerating from tenth to eleventh has been done dozens of times, and is a very unoriginal way to get the Doctor into Equestria.

Furthermore, this version of the Doctor resembles what is found in Doctor Whooves Adventures and Doctor Whooves and Assistant, which are the two most well-known stories/audio dramas in this category. It doesn't seem very original, so it probably won't get that many views, despite it having better grammar than 95% of other Doctor Whooves fics.

That being said, while not very original, it is written well. Have a nice day.

5355315 Thank you for your comment, and while I know it isn't very original now, I do hope that once I get into the swing of it, I'll find a way to set myself apart.

Wilfred Mott knocked four times,

What are you talking about? Who's Wilfred Mott? (No, I've never watched Doctor Who.)

5356719 Wilfred Mott (Wilf to his friends) is the grandfather of one of the Doctor's companions, Donna Noble, and he was the one who fulfilled the prophecy that heralded the Tenth Doctor's death. The knocking was part of the prophecy.

Wilfred Mott knocked four times

my boy.

Not sure why this was submitted to Twily's Library, since that group is about collecting stories of foals. I don't see any fillies or colts starring in this one.

5360490 sorry about that, was looking for Twilight's Library. Feel free to remove it if you haven't already...

So, The Doctor is making a Maiden voyage in Equestria, eh? This can only end well!

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