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Mai Oates


As you walk through Ponyville, the first ponies you notice are the ones that really stand out. Namely, the mane six. But every time you saw that pony brushing past you or singing in the chorus or sitting in the crowd, it was one of us. One of the background.
A fic centering around the background mane six: Doctor Whooves, Vinyl Scratch, Lyra Heartstrings, Bon Bon Sweetie Drops, Derpy Hooves, and Octavia.
Doctor Whooves as Twilight Sparkle
Derpy Hooves as Pinkie Pie
Vinyl Scratch as Rainbow Dash
Octavia as Rarity
Lyra Heartstrings as Applejack
Bon Bon Sweetie Drops as Fluttershy
And Roseluck Tyler as Spike the Dragon


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Chapters (2)
Comments ( 49 )

This.....this I will watch with interest. Why not add a meme to show my opinion?

This is very good and has a lot of potential but it screws with my (and most of the rest of the fandom's) headcannon because you say that derpy is dinky's sister instead of being her mother and sparkler being her sister

Pfft! Screw fanons! I got my own style!:trollestia:
Meh, I'm not into the derpy and dinky being mother and daughter. :applejackunsure:

New story by Sugar Sprinkles? :pinkiegasp:

Upvoted because it sounds awesome, will read soon.

Write on,

Aw, you're so nice! :rainbowkiss:
And guess what?
It's not a Oneshot!:trollestia:

Which, of course, means that it's at least 20% cooler than it automatically was just for being written by you! :rainbowdetermined2:

Write on,

Why is it so short?:rainbowhuh: This is just the summary re-written. Please work on making it longer. :raritywink:

This is much better than the prologue. I was going to quit then and there... just one question. Why even bother making the prologue if it's going to be the summary all over again? :rainbowhuh: Otherwise this is great. :pinkiehappy:

thanks! :pinkiehappy: I just wanted to have a short intro for people who are too lazy to read the summary. I know I'm guilty of skipping it.:applejackunsure:

Fine work, good sir. I will continue to read this with my cup of tea, and I promise to titter at only THE MOST appropriate times.


Other than some minor grammar errors, this was awesome. I liked how you not only created a Cutie Mark story for each of them (sans Doctor), but also related some of them to those of the original Elements.

It will certainly be interesting to see how these six deal with the same problems as the canon Elements. I'm especially exited to see the Gala.

Quick question, though: do any of them actually have any sort of relation to the Princesses? Since Doctor is replacing Twi, but he's obviously not her student...

Eagerly awaiting a new chapter!

Write on,

Do 'Party of One' next!!!!

Can't wait to see Ditzy go crazy! :pinkiecrazy::derpytongue2:

P.S. replace Celestia with Luna for The Doctor to communicate with because Luna would most likely know of The Doctor and it would fill a major plot hole.

*claps* Good work sir. Absolute genius.
You will be mentioned at the end of the chapter when Luna first comes in!:raritywink:

Well, as suggested brilliantly by Neon Scar, I shall be using Luna as the main Princess rather than Celestia.:pinkiesmile:
I'm so glad you liked it!:pinkiehappy:
I'll have to think about which episode to do next:derpyderp2:

*brohoof for Lyra?*
(Also, I'm a mare. :derpytongue2:)

3265513 ...Well, I feel a little silly now.

Fine work gentlemare?

The background Princess for the Backgroundverse! Brilliant! Genius! I love it!

Luna is best Princess. Three-way brohoof!

Write on,

Yes I would just LOVE :raritystarry: to see the episode Party for One

urmagerd! i wuv it so much! i l:heart:ve ALL these characters and doctor who! Perfection! Molto Bene! :derpytongue2: :heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

3300660 I agree! party of one! ... or winter wrap up ... or the one with the Flim Flam brothers(forgot the name) party of one is duh best tho! :derpyderp2::derpyderp1::derpytongue2::heart::heart:

Yeah I would really enjoy knowing what they did while the mane six was dealing with :pinkiecrazy:

:rainbowderp: Wow. I have never had people so enthusiastic about my story before...:pinkiehappy: Yay!
Also, I applaud you good fellow whovian.:derpytongue2:

Well, i'll be honest, i was a bit surprised at the 'first chapter', but i'd say that this was worth it. Well done! (And if it still counts, Party of One.)

Well, the decision was made anyway, and it IS Party of One!:derpytongue2:

"Music of my destiny"

Hmm... Interesting! ^_^

Glad you found my track inspirational. <3

:rainbowkiss: I loved your music!!! And I'm so glad that you found my story and read it!!!
Keep Making Music!

This is such a good idea :twilightsmile:

Are you still taking episode requests?

Aw, thanks!
And, yeah, I think I am.....
:twilightblush: I just can't get a good idea for Party of One!

3622284 Ah I see :twilightsmile:
I would watch the episode over and over (until you have literally had enough of it) and see if you come up with any ideas.

But if you are still taking them, I'd love it if you did my favourite episode Luna Eclipsed :)

Hmm, good idea. Though I'm not quite sure how much anything would change.....
I'll have to think about tat one!:raritywink:

Fantastic story! I really liked it. :D

Uh for the next one I'm not really sure, I would vote for Winter Wrap Up, Party of One or Too Many Pinkie Pies :P Keep up the good work! :pinkiesmile:

That was fantastic! I await the next chapter with undying anticipation!

Thank you! Though I can't give you a date, I'm a bit stuck on how to write the next chapter! Nice to see enthusiasm though!:pinkiehappy:

party of one solition.

lots of muffins gomissing

everyone know derpy loves muffins

so if lkost went away she would go craaaazry

Love the idea of The Doctor not knowing what a Cutie Mark was!
I would like to see the Episode 'Too many PikiePie's' Turned into 'Too many Derpy's' :pinkiehappy::moustache:

Say, I would like to see "Sweet and Elite" with Octavia in it.

Awwwww! music brought them together!

Nice spellan

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