Hey folks. JusSonic here, finally sending fics here. While I was worried about coming here for some time now, I decided to give this place a shot...as long as you be fair, 'kay?
Here's a real twist: Twilight and her friends are dragons while Spike is a pony. A revision of the pilot episode as the dragons must fight to save Equestria from the arrival of Moon Dragon. Will Twilight Sparkle learn what friendship is all about? Also include the short story, 'New Dragon's Revenge'.
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the premise is pretty good, the first chapter feels like a rough draft but not bad. I'll watch oh and
you might want to change the left to late
This sounds like a good idea you have an excuse to put the main six in alternate world's beside this dragon world I think you mite be on to something.
I wish you would stop using the present tense, it makes the story hard to read. But you have an interesting premise, so don't spoil it.
See: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/70891/my-little-dragon
Maybe the original 'Mane 6 as Dragon, Spike as Pony' but with an entirely original plot so far.
You also switch gender pronouns on the Dragon version of Celestia on occasion.
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Okay, I think I got that fixed.
sometimes you slip up with pony/dragon in your sentences, besides that, awersome story
I found it a little closer to the real story than I thought it would be but it was a nice story but now I know I'm not the only one with a universal viewer but I wonder if theirs has a multiverse capacity like mine and can see into the other multiverses out there like mine can... In any case It was worth a read and I faved it..
I like it.