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I may not be a great writer,

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After some prodding from Twilight, Rainbow Dash reluctantly agrees to start writing poetry. Obviously, Rainbow isn't a born poet, but over time her skills begin to mature, and boredom changes into self-expression.

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Comments ( 17 )

This shit... is fucking art...

totally nice! I wan'ts more!!! :pinkiehappy:

OH COME ON!!!

Ponies try to push me, it has no affect
I push right back, there's a lot more affect
Their blown away by the force of my affect
I can't think of another word that ryme rhymes with affect

Im so alone, out in this canyon
Not one single girl in this canyon
Or anything rhyming with canyon
So come and see me if you need a manyon

3750913 :rainbowlaugh:
What is that from?

3751408 [youtube=d1HKNDU-nzU]

Gah! Cliffhangers!!! :pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:

3751948
You want to know the worst part?
I only wrote because I was feeling productive today.
That only happens once every few months. :trollestia:

3752260 Begins to Tear up slightly... :fluttercry: B-But its so gooooooodd.......

3752352
Would you say it's...
amazingly awesome? :pinkiecrazy:

Well, I'll try to be more productive. I actually have finals coming up next week, so I'll have a lot of time between exams to do whatever. Maybe I'll have a chapter out then. :raritywink:

3752370 *GASP!!!!* :pinkiegasp: Amazinly Super Dupper Awesomely fantastic!!!! ThankyouThankyouThankyouThankyouThankyouThankyouThankyouThankyouThankyouThankyouThankyouThankyou!!!!!!! *Gives a Big hug!* And good luck on you'er tests!!! :pinkiehappy:

READING BINGE !!! :pinkiehappy:

Reading binge!" She squeed. "I'm gonna make some popcorn!" And with that, she leapt to her hooves and scampered into the kitchen, leaving a fit of giggles in her wake.

:facehoof: friggin adorkable....

:pinkiegasp: I see that!!! OMG OMG OMG!!! SO AWESOME!!! And them lines! Such good lines! I love them so! *Gives a Great big H-U-G!!!* you are just wonderful!

:pinkiehappy:

Keep it up... I hope to see more later. :twilightsmile: It always excites me to see new art from the stories that I've felt attached to.... :pinkiehappy:

This reminds me of the book Love that Dog... Anyone else?

Damn it twi is adorkable there.

Glad to see this updated!

You have written a fine short story here.

You use story beats instead of telling to show the story, and rendering it enjoyable to see Rainbow's change. How you constructed the poetry with words crossed out was both clever and character revealing.

I wish there was more for me to gush on. You did a wonderful job with this story and should be proud of yourself.

Well done, writer.

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