I may not be a great writer,
Ditzy Doo, a young filly living in Cloudsdale, is hidden from the rest of Equestria for her entire life... until a certain pegasus discovers her and gives her some much-needed hope and friendship.
Accepted into Twilight's Library on 6/2/14.
Now with a wonderful blog feature/review by SirTruffles.
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Upvote 'cuz I know you put work into this
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Thanks! And, yes I did
Fire every friendship cannon....FOR GREAT JUSTICE!!!
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Alright, I know an author is supposed to get the reader feeling something, and you definitely did that well!
But... Jesus Christ, brony! I was sickened, angered... God knows what. I'll read as you update, simply becasue that fucker needs to go!
Can't believe the ponies would have anything like this going on...
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Thanks, that was what I was going for actually. Believe me, I hate him too. It'll get better though.
...after it gets a little worse first.
2704635 Damn you. I can't freakin' stand domestic abuse without needing to release my anger in some way... on a related note, I'm off for a hard workout!
Poor Ditzy
Keep it coming
Quite interesting so far, will definitely follow for more. Just a few things, I recommend splitting some of the paragraphs up, as a few are just huge. Also, contrary to popular belief, you don't indent paragraphs when you already have spacing in between them (don't listen to people who tell you that you do, they are wrong
).
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Thank you
I've been trying to make the paragraphs somewhat long because with other stories I've written, I split the paragraphs up more often and end up with about 100 two-sentence paragraphs, which I think looks kind of undeveloped and sloppy. I'll try to find a balance between the two.
Also I just like indenting paragraphs
don't you?
This is very good. I am liking how you are handling this so far, and am very much looking forwards to seeing more.
Also, I have something for Derpy's father.
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Thanks. I'd love to send your gift to him, but I can't right now in the story.
...maybe later.
2875058 No problem, and make sure he has lots of fun with my little gift when the time comes.
as i was reading this i punched the table a lot cuz the stallion pony made me want to stab everyone
.
good fic s far though
DITZY WE HAVE A PROBLEM!
http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/297/b/d/muffins_title_graphic_by_saddlesoapopera-d4duu9d.jpg
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Whoa dude that was epic...
do rainbow! go ditzy
DEATH TO THE FATHER
Horay, she is finally out of that hellhole where a responsible adult can see her, get her some real medical attention, and learn about what happened to her so the guards can come lock (or better yet, cut) her abusive father up.
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You may be right, sir.
...maybe.
2976275 She's walking around with a mangled wing. That is not going to go unnoticed even if Rainbow does not take her to the hospital herself (which she should do, but she is just a kid so I am not really expecting it).
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...you're making it very hard to not spoil anything.
But yeah, that's definitely what should happen. I already started the beginning of the next chapter, and it may change things a bit.
2976324 Well, I guess I'll have to wait and see then. About the only change I can see coming is her father catching them which could go any number of ways, although Rainbow should be able to get away and get help when she sees him in action.
I pounded my keyboard so hard with rage it closed this page.
When are be update? For I enjoy.
3979208 Hopefully sometime in the next few weeks. I refuse to post anything else until I update this.
Oh dear Luna
ALLISFORGIVENIFDERPYISOKANDTHATDUDEHAVESOMETHINGHORRIBLEHAPPEN
*pukes*
THIS STUPID FUCK BETTER GET THE WRATH OF FAUST BROUGHT DOWN ON HIS FUCKING HEAD FOR DOING SOMETHING SO HORRIBLE TO DITZY!
WHAT.THE.FUCK!!?? I wasn't expecting THIS! JESUS CHRIST! Ahhhhhhhh
Someone I know has THIS to say:
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to Ditzy's father.
I'm not sure i like where this is going...
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Well, there goes Rainbow going for backup. I wonder how many cigarettes they'll sell Daddy Dearest for in Cloudsdale State Pen?
okay, I've never had a fic induce this much ponycidal rage in me before, whoever dash gets to help better deal with ditzy's father.
HARSHLY
4253749 5 cigars for a kick in the groin!
That guy is messed up... He needs to be dealt with, soon
Rage level: Increasing.
Must look at cover picture to feel better.
Update quick
*Pumps fists in the air* YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!
Well, Daddy Dearest is going to learn something very important.....he can't do whatever he wants merely because he happened to be in the room when something happened. Also, most ponies are going to want to douse him in kerosene and make him cosplay as Johnny Storm after seeing the end result of his creatively expressing himself.
Sorcery indeed...
God, this always gives me the shivers.
But that's why i like it so much, it keeps my eyes glued to my screen!!
Judging by the dates you've published the chapters, The next one wont be out until August, am I wrong
BUT IM SHTILL UR NUMBUR UNO FAN CIWWUS
4299412 Maybe not that late, but it could be June. School's getting really busy now before AP tests and finals.
(what did I do to deserve all this spirited fanship?)
4299439 DAMN you reply fast!
4299515 I spend a lot of time on FiMFiction