Keeping Your Balance

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Scootaloo teaches Rainbow Dash how to fly.

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RuinQueenofOblivion

RuinQueenofOblivion #1 · May 27th, 2016 · · ·

Awwww, so cute, great fanfic.

Indeliblink

Indeliblink #2 · May 27th, 2016 · · ·

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The Bricklayer

The Bricklayer #3 · May 27th, 2016 · · ·

Well, what a interesting reversal of roles! Just for that alone, you get a fave. Great fic!

superfun

superfun #4 · May 27th, 2016 · · ·

At first I was confused why this didn't have an Alternate Universe tag based on the description, but then RD's reasoning made perfect sense.

Plus, I can actually see this concept being used as an episode.

Metool Bard

Metool Bard #5 · May 27th, 2016 · 1 · 1 ·

The way Rainbow Dash teaches this lesson is actually quite clever. Almost a bit too clever. As in I don't know if Rainbow Dash could've come up with this on her own.

I'm honestly torn about this story. It's very cute and touching, but it also feels kinda weird that Rainbow would be bonding with Scootaloo in this specific fashion. It almost feels like she was intentionally trying to teach Scoot a lesson about not giving up, and Dashie usually doesn't plan these things out. I hesitate to call it completely out of character, as Rainbow Dash is not a dumb pony by any stretch of the imagination. Still, her behavior here just seems strange to me.

Ah well. It's still a sweet story. You earn a like, if nothing else.

Telaros

Telaros #6 · May 28th, 2016 · 1 · ·

This was fun, sweet, and just well painted in words. I don't think I have read a story that straight focuses on these two having a sort of real honest to goodness sisterly hangout moment like this. Guess I got lucky today!

Hope to see more stories from you again, thanks for writing this and best wishes for future works.

River Road