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Xyphrose


Why in the world do theis people follow me. Ahhhh, its amazing!!!

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it ended too fast.

3458898 I did say I didn't have high hopes besides it was just a random story only to get my mind off my other. Thanks for the feedback though:ajsmug:

3458898

*walks on stage*
"ahem"
-silence-
"THAT'S WHAT SHE SAID!"
*bows*appluase*
*walks off stage*

back on topic, good story but i would have to agree with him.

right more if you will, but no futashy. if thats alright with you...

3459115 Duly noted. Doesn't help the story's based off a crappy picture

3459209 Thanks, yeah I want to get a proofreader but I don't know who. Thanks for the comment, im hoping the next one will be better. :twilightblush:

3459249 I think we could work something out and yeah I play xbox, not as much as I used to but I still do :trollestia:

I enjoyed it :D small story, but it got the point across in a reasonable time. Please write more ^_^

Could'a been longer. We don't see Flutterlestia very often.

Good Story, but far too short!:pinkiesad2:

I wanna see the pic it was based off of. :twilightblush:

3458908 Not, it's great. Just go back, make it longer, and put more into the smut part. It would be so much better if you tripled the length of the sex scene. Another tip, have Celestia do something that represents "claiming" Fluttershy. I.e. mind control, collar, tramp stamp, enslavement through pleasure/addiction to the royal cock. Then, have the other mane 6 succum to the glory that is Celestia. The royal harem has been empty for over a century and need to be refilled by needy mares.:pinkiecrazy: :derpytongue2:

Hermaphroditic princesses... methinks Mr. Sentry is in for a surprise :twilightblush:

In any case, I agree with the above comments that the sex scene should have been longer and more drawn out. As also stated above, you could continue this with Celestia claiming the rest of the six as their encounters don't pan out like they expected.

3460711 Maybe I don't know. It was meant to be just a one shot thing but maybe ill add more chapters. IDK :applejackunsure:

3461082 I think you should keep going, I really like it

it was nice, but it could be better. Now you have to write Celestia claming the other girls!:pinkiehappy:

i could fix this up for you, if you allowed me. I mean, I don't even want to count all the errors you made. But don't worry, everyone makes tons of errors. :ajsmug:

3458898that's what she said :rainbowlaugh:

3463625 somepony beat you to it bub.

Desperately needs to be continued.

Wasn't there a futa celestia claims fluttershy comic (wip) somewhere? I'd have to check.. it's on a tumblr

edit:found it..infernal-beggar made the post

I like it... maybe our dear Luna could get in on the action?
Would the princesses share?

3531046I've thought about it. Maybe a threesome between one of the characters. Sorry it took so long for this chapter to come out :twilightblush:

Lure Pinkie in with the promise of cupcakes fit for a Princess... She won't suspect a thing! *evil laugh*

3531901 Lol. No party pony could resist that :trollestia:

3532393 ROFL holy crap my chest hurts. God that sentence and image brought a tear to my eye. :pinkiehappy:

3532591
"I would never collect a bunch of mares, rut them silly, and them put them in my basement! A harem is more of Luna's thing...
I would make an exception it that's what you wanted, though."
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3532638lol oh my god please stop. Jesus that gave me an idea though. :trixieshiftright: I wonder....

3532723 Stop please just fucking stop it hurts to much lol :rainbowlaugh:

3532765 OH MY FUCKIGN GOD IM GOING TO MURDER YOU! LOL

3532788 *Jaw drops and hits the floor*

3532836 I have died and gone to heaven. Alright where the mares at? :moustache:

3532936
"Twilight! The buck is this shit?! You brought softcore porn to my sleepover?! What are you, some damn virgin?! I taught you better than this! It's HARDCORE! It's always HARDCORE! You bucking disgrace!"
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3532978 that's just mean lol

3533042 What was that idea you had, btw?

3533413
Hmmm... Sounds hotness.

RC

mor:moustache::twilightsheepish::facehoof::trollestia::scootangel::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::pinkiegasp::rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:it is thiss good and moar. pleas give us more!

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