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NinjaMare
Welcome to main page readers! my name is Floral Essence (aka NinjaMare), and here you will find mostly HiE fics, among other kinds of fics. hopefully you all enjoy what I have to offer.
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I think you accidently made a mistake with the sequel link. because when I clicked on it it just put me back to here.
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WOOPS! ugh heheheheh so i have.
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all fixed!
Let me be the first to give your story a thumbs up , I look forward to its development.
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thanks, i didn't think this little story about a teenager & bat pony would do so well.
now this fic is only going to have five Chapters, and I've already got them labeled, and two of them done. however, i am willing to put in a BONUS ch. but i'll that decision to, YOU. the first five people who read this, leave a comment of a particular topic, situation, or event you want Misty Moon & Zaq partake in for this chapter. this is to show you, my readers some love.
What if Misty parents were shown in? Or talks of marriage? Because I’m sure the topic of marriage have to be in. Or maybe when Misty become in heat?
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actually the next chapter is about Misty bring Zaq to meet her parents, and.....let's just say things turn out good, but also awkward.
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excellent story my friend, it would be nice if they had
a small series of them going on an equestrian tour.
Misty showing Zaq the wonders of the kingdom and Zaq doing a
report on possible tourist places for humans.
without neglecting the seasoning parts of course
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i would really like to make chapters like that, but for the purpose of this story, i'm just focusing on the relationship and hardship that Misty & Zaq go through before i get to the final chapter.
More please 👍👍👍
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don't worry i got the next chapter already written.
It’s cute so far. A little too early (in my opinion) to think otherwise. Just a few corrections, like here:
Where you could have used “they” and maybe “room. When”. Hopefully I’m not nitpicking here cause I know I missed some earlier and this was closer to the end of the story. It just seems like it’s running on too much and throws me off on reading a good story
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But it’s still good and would really like to read more of this (and their) story
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i'll take any tips i can get. i like to improve my writing to give people a good read. i know i should have an editor, but i like to do the editing myself. that's how i usually improve.
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. I just hate seeing comments “bashing” authors cause they read too much into it and start saying stuff that’s not really there 
. I like it if it’s helping the author in small ways like this 
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Hey, no problem. I like to see authors get better at their writing
Again, your welcome and hopefully you get a chance to do a few more chapters to help you with your writing of this and future stories
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It's a start, an hope of something blossoming beautifully perhaps....
I love the story and I would like it to see if they have a Filly ora colt or both
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well at the end of the last chapter i left it implied that they will have a foal.
Thank you for the story
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? for what?