Meet Dianthus, son of Twilight Sparkle, the ruler and peace-keeper of the whole Equestrian world. The king disagrees with the sentiment of friendship and soon this stallion will get change in any means necessary. Even though it just might end everything.
*Attention!*
This story is a test to see if people would want to read it at all. This snippet I have contributed will give me the much needed information without wasting time and energy on something that will get no likes or comments. That is all.
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3454473
That was definitely an interesting story... as I read through it, Dianthus reminded me more and more of Sombra...
I am also curious as to where he got the amulet from, considering it was locked away by the princess herself... how was he able to get his hooves on such a powerful object...?
I will also presume that the next part of the story will be going back in time, considering the story is about Dianthus and his rule...
This line...
Was Dianthus' father Sombra...?
THAT would be an interesting twist... but I'm not writing your story for you...
There were some minor punctuation errors as well as some spelling errors, but all around, I would say this story is off to a great start... I know this story was more of a test, but should you decide to continue it, i would love to see more...
Wow. To lose a son like that. Though I kind of would to see more of this where there is more to explain further into the disagreements. I'll be honest, I'm a sucker for friendship stories not working itself into a typical happy-type story where mostly everyone here is so used to. You got a thumbs up.
3454506
I like it, I would read it, yes I would. This leaves a lot of questions in my head that hooks me into the potential plot. It makes you think questions pertaining to oneself. Keep up the good work.
3456729
Yea but all dem dislikes, I just don't understand.
Writing for "likes" and "comments" is a hollow endeavor.
Write it because you want to. Admiration will manifest naturally when it is due.
3456752
dislikes are odd like that. I wish the button was not there (Facebook actually did something right? Eya...no it did not.) Most people will hit the dislike button without reading the story, or if they have read they rarely mention why they hit it. As for me I hit the Like button, because I did like it. Concentrate on the # of views and the # of likes (Dislike is Irrelevant to your art.)
3456794>>3456793
I see, well alright. I might continue this story, after I'm done with some others.
3456848
Good luck! you amazing writer you!
3456794
That's some pretty awful advice
8971460
Commenting on something back from 2013? Just think on that.
8971768
Haven't noticed that,
Sorry bout that that then.
8971885
All good, you're cool.