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A short story based on the depressing but very well put together Youtube video 'What if the Mane 6 died one by one?' Told from the perspective of Rainbow Dash, the last surviving member of the Mane 6.

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This is really, really good for your first short story. I'm not one to read these kind of stories, but hey, it caught my eye for one reason or other, and well, I'm stupid like that.

Really. It's one of the better ones I've seen from new authors.

My only thoughts is that I think if the Mane Six really did lose a friend, it would only make their commitment to being themselves and fighting on even stronger, extremely so for Rainbow Dash. I can not see them killing themselves because they lost one of their comrades.

She'd be the one who would live through it all because it was the right thing to do. They'd want her to. She would do it to represent all of them. She's that strong of a mare deep down inside, and why she's my favorite pony. She'd handle the burden even if it killed her through stress. I think any of them would.

But alas, these are short heartstring pullers. I'm thinking too hard.

3443277 Thanks for the kind comments, glad you liked the story. You might well be right about the Mane 6, but since I based the story on a video where they all died, well, I had to stick to it! :raritydespair:

Only made it as far as RD's salute. Can't cry at work- bad form. Twi utterly has my heart. No, make that Applejack - what am I sayin? it's Dashie, of course!
I'll try reading it after a couple of scotch and soda's. Just keep the sharp objects away.
First story?
Wow

Made me cry really hard. What a wonderfully written story though

I gotta admit dude i absoloutly hate you for writing this (yes that is a good thing as the story definetly got the reaction you were going for!)

Hmm...

The ending with Rainbow Dash falling reminded me of that one story. What was it called again? I think it was called Catch You, if I am not mistaken.

All in all, this was one of the stories that actually made me think about my life. About my decisions. It really got to me. Great job.

Sir... You have made me cry... :fluttercry:
Also for you people who are too lazy to open another window to see the video, here is it:

:fluttercry::fluttershbad::raritycry::raritydespair:
This is an amazing but truly sad story.:pinkiesad2:
You are also a very amazing writer who is able to bring out real emotions:fluttershyouch::heart:

I hate you and love you at the same time :fluttercry:

3472831>>3479833>>3483992>>3444430>>3444597>>3445145 Thank you all for your comments! Glad you liked the story and that it achieved its goal- to make you cry :pinkiesad2: That is indeed the video in question, which is sure to bring more liquid sadness to your eyes :raritydespair:

HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME
I AM LITERALLY SOBBING ON MY BED
I MADE A PUDDLE
AND TEARS KEEP STREAKING DOWN MY FACE
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No! How did you do this to me!? I barely ever cry! Now I'm crying! No, more like sobbing! (quietly) :pinkiesad2::raritydespair::fluttercry::raritycry:

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Sorry everyone! But, that was the objective of this particular story, so I'm glad it is having the intended effect :raritydespair:

Amazing story. Great first fic, and while I was saddened by the story I just can't really see them commiting suicide. Other than that have a thumbs up.

Wish you could have extended yourself a bit more about their motivations to 'Do it' but a nice story nonetheless..... :pinkiesad2:

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