Twilight has fallen in love for the first time- with her best friend's mare. How is she coping with this? Not particularly well.
A short one-shot story as Twilight tries to deal with her feelings.
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Aww so sad....
Good story tho
The story is being unfairly down voted because it deals with the larger implications of this relationship.
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I know the feel, bro. I know the feel.
I'm sorry that the story is being treated this way. The story is mechanically and grammatically sound. You went to an uncomfortable place, and people decided to punish you for that in absence of judging the value of the story itself. Do not, I repeat, do not let the story's reception affect your view of yourself as a writer. The narrative is here, the competency is here...
... just go back and capitalize the "I" in "But I wish she had me instead."
Best of luck with your future efforts.
Poor Twilight. Nice story, and I don't really understand these dislikes. It's a nice story and it doesn't have a happy ending, and it's a refreshing change of pace
3449356>>3448973>>3449437 Thank you all for your comments. I knew this kind of story would always get hate, like you said Descendant, just from its subject matter, but hey, that's alright! Besides, this was just something that struck me suddenly and I basically wrote it in about half an hour, so if anyone actually enjoys it, that's a bonus!
yay
Eh, maybe she should let it out. Those things have a tendency to fester. Not to the parties involved with the problem though, maybe a psychiatrist.
I'm not sure if she really is in love or it's more of a confusion because she's never known love before. A lot of her reasons are as much a best friend as they are a love interest.
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Indeed. A refreshing - if brief - change of pace.
I have to admit, I sympathize with Twilight... through as someone pointed out... is she in love? Love is hard to realize, its hard to work out... for someone who has never felt it before...
3450883>>3451672 Well, that's for the reader to decide. Defining 'love' and differentiating it from simple lust, a crush, or a good friendship, is hard enough in the real world, so I thought I would leave it open to interpretation here. Maybe it's just her first crush, maybe it's true love- we've all been there, so you can decide for yourselves!
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Reader interpretation... I always like leaving it like that.
3451672 It certainly doesn't help that she has so many self-esteem issues
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Yes, that too.
There is a simple solution. Reopen the mirror pool and clone Rarity. Problem solved!
This is just sad...for Twilight, I guess Love is hard to notice, especially if you never had one before..
I think we've all been in this situation before, maybe not with someone of the same sex... but in a similar situation nonetheless, with someone we can't have... sigh...
This... This hits me right where it counts. I don't really suppose anyone cares, but I recently admitted to a girl that I liked her.
She told me to go like someone else.
I'm not sure which is worse, not knowing, or knowing they don't like you.
Now I feel a bit bad for constantly shipping Rarity and Spike...
This isn't a social problem, it's a geometrical problem. Why? Because it's a love triangle! I know, I know: "That joke is bad and you should feel bad."
Super depressing
10/10 saucwey
romn
The feels bro
the feels 
Twi should invest in some power tools?
Poor twi
First fic to make me cry in months...good job.