Shining Armour's world has fallen apart. The only mare he has ever loved has deceived him. Overcome with jealousy, he lashes out, and now he awaits punishment for his crimes.
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Surprisingly, I enjoyed this. It was well written and I saw no grammar mistakes. Good job.
yeah i like theses stories but they are really rare. keep going
good fucking bitch
wow did that sound spiteful guys im sorry but yea ont kool candy. and arthor way to make me hate candy thats a first
I have to wonder why this has 11 downvotes before I read it.
Well...
I think I'll read it soon.
Cadence, Flash, consider yourselves lucky. If Shining didn't finished you both off, I would have hunt you both down, and guess what.
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What Shining did to you two, is nothing compared to what I would have done.
P.S: The pacing is a bit too quick, but it's a good story nonetheless
This was good. Articuno approves. Out of curiosity, what do you imagine happening if Shining had done anything differently?
That was sad.. Cadence is a little..you know.
Is THAT all there is? More!!!1!!!one!!!
FLASH!!!!!!!
YOU FUCKIN BITCH!!!! And cadance your the princess of 'cheating on your husband' WHY THE FUCK DID YOU DO DIS!?!?!?!?!!
GIVE US MOAR
Super epic rescue and get away :3
Edit (2018): So it has been five years; I've been reorganizing my bookshelves of late and figured I would read this story through again. While I don't hold that cheating warrants death, neither do I hold that death is an appropriate sentence to a legitimate emotional turmoil.
While I like both Cadence and Shining Armour and am extremely glad this is just a fanfic and not canon, this was a very enjoyable story.
The feels THE FFEEEEEELS!
That was the best revenge
Hm... Any ideas on what I should name my new ocean? Maybe the Teary sea.
This is one of the reasons why I'm scared to read Sad-Tragedy stories; my heart can't take the feels
Don't understand why they hung SHining, he did exactly what should have been done. His wife whored around with somepont else for over a year. They both deserved to be shot.
Shining done fucked up
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Cheating doesn't warrant death.
this feels like a retelling of the shanty willam taylor execpt the ending isnt as "happy"
Can't blame him. Was really tempted to do the same thing to my ex wife for awhile.
You need to put an 'Alternate Universe' tag on this soon. Canon ponies don't have guns. That one part broke SOD.
So... This is how the King Sombra timeline that Twilight saw when fighting Starlight came about. No Cadence equals no restored Crystal Empire.
Drunk, Angry, and then to come to the apartment to find both there. He reacted as I figured he would. Not suprised at the end. The interesting thing is that the sheer guilt he has overrode any defense he could have made. And ponys would have sympathized. Maybe enough to get him something other than the disgraceful fate.
I can't be the only person who started hearing that Delilah song in their head while reading this.
You still need to put the "Alternate Universe" tag.