7711933 as it happens, yeah

It's going to get real bad when his teeth start falling out for new ones to grow in. Maybe he'll get lucky and they'll just be transfigured as-is without that whole process.

Yay

Will this be updating anytime SOON angan? I have to ask.

Great to see an other chapter of this story, not much going on at the moment, but it 's getting there. I can't wait to see what will come up next.

excellent chapter

Interestin' chapter.

7712171 Perfect timing holy wow.

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My eyes change colour with everything i wear.

Do you know why that is?

Will this story have a happy ending?

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Your writing definitely seems to have come a rather long way since I last saw this before its revision, so kudos to the rather sizeable improvement on your writing ability there. Only thing I could potentially criticize here is that each chapter feels just a little too brief, this one seemed a bit longer which was nice, but the rest felt a bit clipped.

Gonna have to go back and read some of your other stuff now, it's been... awhile. A long while. Still, keep up the writing, enjoyable read so far on the rewrite here.

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No Sad or Tragedy tags so I'm pretty sure it won't end badly. However, it is always darkest before dawn. Who knows how bad things will get before it improves.

Not taking this well, I see.

I think Gerry should just relax, and get away as fast as they can...

I don't see things getting better in the near future for them...

That was a great chapter.

This is by far the only realistic depiction of a human in equestrian story that I've seen. Behaviour wise.

So how's it coming along? Will we get to see an update soon? Keep up the good work!

is this story dead?

Pretty good, so far. I recommend you rush through the rest of the TF in the next chapter, and then you can get to the part you probably want to write (judging from your summary): about the protagonist failing to deal with being a mare and how she picked the right occupation but the wrong universe. Don't worry about disappointing us or skipping too much; the important thing is to write what you want to write.

Or, you know, keep writing about Gilda I guess.

8118922 You know, you're right, I do like Gilda

"Well I don't know what the fuck it is. Maybe I was just being stupid, like stupid enough to think I could scrub the hair off of my leg and go back to normal, is that what you want to hear?"