And we'll be here when you do.

You have to have an end goal in mind. You can pm me. I am good at brain storming

The notes make me picture Rainbow trying to wrestle her to the ground and Toffee not noticing.

To be honest I don't have much of an idea where to take this

Have you previously confirmed that you're not going to take this in the same direction as the original version of the story?

Glad to see more.^^

"eventually"
Haha

Always glad to see more of this.

Whoo

Applejack nodded with a smile. "Don't you worry, this is the friendliest town you'll ever see. "

Tell that to Zecora.

"Fluttershy," the yellow one whispered. How on the nose.

Well, that's a thing with most ponies.

"She's a famer Pinkie," Applejack responds to an unspoken question. "That's why she's so big."

"You aren't that big Applejack," Rainbow scoffed.

She has a point.

This was a awesomely chill chapter.

He probably shoukd have just refused to go by Twilight's name, its stupid. Just call himself Gerry and if anyone says he is called otherwise claim they're lying because they want to humiliate him by making everyone call him a name he doesn't like.

For some reason this chapter seems to forget that Toffee has meet both Rarity and Celestia.

go to sleep early and occasionally talk with AJ, Granny, Applebloom or Big Mac.

Except back then I wasn't a transgender horse.