That was so funny /awesome read.

I'm always glad to see a new chapter of this in my notices.

loving the rewrite of this so far, going really good so far.

This is like The Fly, except with the promise of hot horse sex!
Which would have seriously improved The Fly, IMO.

My stomach gurgled, and Twilight leap on the opportunity to change the subject.

I wish this guy would stop yelling at Twilight. She's been nothing but kind. As far as landing on alien planets is concerned, things could have been so much worse.

But he hasn't seen the show so he doesn't know what these weird talking-horse things are. On top of that, there is the fear/frustration of missing friends/family. That's a realistic touch to world-shifting not all fics have. To really imagine what he's going through, we'd have to let go of the knowledge we have too. Pretend the world the main character ended up really was an alien world and the main residents were gelatinous blobs with wiggling tentacles, giant mouth and eyes. Take that image and pretend the one weird alien creature treating you has been nothing but kind, but also very weird to look at and the world has strange ways of working.

If we reverse our thinking, imagine a weird alien landing in our world. Would any of us be as civil with it as Twilight has been, or would you freak out instead? Twilight has kept her cool in this fic. Not sure if everyone else would have the same reaction.