Everyone is young at some point or another. Even alicorns.
Before being assigned Day and Night, before even becoming alicorns, Luna and Celestia suffered through the Great War. Times were plagued by starvation and suffering, and a relentless dictator ruled the land. When an attempt at salvation goes horribly wrong, the two siblings are forced out into the world on a journey that may threaten to separate them forever.
*squee*
Must add to group!
Pretty good story, I mean, so far, I only read the prologue, however, the point still stands. It does one good to read a sad, dark tragedy once in a while. Seriously, Equestria cannot be all Pink Fluffy Unicorns Dancing on Rainbows. The only thing bad I have found so far is that the first chapter is a huge wall of text, which makes it a little hard to read. I cannot wait to see what happens next, so I will favorite and up vote. Anyway, as Winston Churchill said, "KBO."
And that ancient tongue? The one even older than Celestia and Luna's ancestors? The one even older than the great God Discord himself? That "ancient tongue" ...was English.
EPIC FORESHADOWING! DRAMATIC IRONY! I found a small mistake here in the chapter titled 02 - Illumination, you repeated this paragraph,
right after this bit of flash forward.
One more thing:
I think you may have meant:
Those few small mistakes notwithstanding, this was another great chapter. I cannot really understand why there are not more up votes on this. Well, I am enjoying it anyway. KBO.
3066568 Thank you very much, I'm going to fix those right now, I edit all my stories myself and I can't catch everything!
I found this one mistake in an otherwise great chapter: 05 - Soft Words and Hard Truths:
In the context of the paragraph, I think you may have meant "Spring was coming." KBO.
Semicolon in the middle of an ellipses. Other than that, Luna finally got a song! To bad it was only two lines, and in text. Anyway, I cannot wait for the next awesome chapter. KBO.
3090161 That semicolon should not be there! TO THE MOON WITH IT!
I am not sure what that "the" is supposed to be.
This looks good, Favorited.
NWAH!? WHAT?!
NO.
THE STORY MUST GO ON!!!
IT'S..... no...... Don't kill this story......
Best of luck in all of your future endeavors.
I screamed many obscenities as I read this chapter.
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK
3352752 Why? Good or bad?
3353541 The final 'Chapter'.
When you said you were no longer continuing it.
Word on if we're going to work together yet?
Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nice chapter title.
6054453 Christ I forgot we even wrote this