• Member Since 12th Jun, 2013
  • offline last seen Aug 4th, 2015

HermitKlam


Canadian. Enjoys writing... and loaths it at the same time. Enjoys reading, animals, games, nighttime, family, nature, and turning little cousins into personal minions. Is a procrastinator.

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After coming back from her adventure in the mirror world, Twilight is having trouble sleeping and is quickly approaching her breaking point.

Will contain spoilers for the movie. If you haven't seen it and are the type to be bothered by spoilers, do not venture further.

A little story that was supposed to be a oneshot, but was split in two. A bit of family fluff and comfort for Twilight after her adventure through the mirror.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 10 )

This is very good as just one chapter. The emotions and feelings are all there, and the last paragraph serves as a good end.


I loved the story and I can relate to the feeling of stress from life being so much that you wish you could be a kid again. I actually envy Twilight in your story, as odd as that sounds. Sometimes I feel like breaking, but I can't, I don't have the luxury in my line of work, and I have to remain internal.

I loved it! It's nice seeing Twilight treat Spike like this, showing she actually cares about him.

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Thank you; I kind of did that on purpose, seeing as I wasn't sure when I'd be able to get the second chapter up; I wanted it to be able to stand by itself in case it took me a while to finish it.
I think we all have those moments, and we'd be really lucky to have someone like Twilight does... Yeah. Doesn't really sound odd. I kind of envy her too :twilightsheepish:

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Thank you; and I agree :pinkiehappy: I loved the episodes where they showed the familial dynamic between the two, instead of just the boss/assistant one.

this is great hope you'll be able to post the second chapter soon

That was a really nice little story, any word on second chapter?

Heeey! When are we getting the second half? :twilightsheepish:

I hope there is more soon

I really like this story hope to read more soon

Sorry for bugging you but I was woundering if you might know when you mint be updatting this story

Ahhhh this story was so awesome I love to twilight fluff it's so overflowing but not overwhelming XD I hope to read more twilight fluff from ya if I have another free weekend.

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