Sweetie Belle was practicing her magic with Starbloom helping her. She was trying to learn teleporting magic, but when she found that to hard she tried to make a portal. The portal spell got messed up and both got sucked into another world, lost and alone they try to find a way back home.
A MLP:FIM\Fast and Furious crossover.... yep....
Teen rating cause of bad words probably at some point maybe?
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Tomorrow...
2887978 Is fine. Can't believe I wrote this.
Oh, boy, this is going to be a wild ride and adventure.
2888009 It's going to be something.
2887997 Then why'd ya do it?
2888009 I feel funny.
2888080 Only way to get it out of my head, was to write it. But a few people seem to like it. So gonna keep at it.
I can tell Dom is a good person, and he is doing his best to make Starbloom and Sweetie Belle for comfortable in his world. Great chapter.
2889505 Well, Dom is a good person, if you look past his rough exterior and everything. He's devoted to his family, not just blood either, he considers his close friends family to. He just made some bad choices in his past.
I envy Dom, because I would love to take a road trip with the ponies, don't matter who either. Loved that moment with Dom talking to Sweetie Belle.
2889808 Little character history moment for Sweetie Belle
Hope this chapter itself didn't suck o.o I was dead tired when I wrote, but it kept swimming around my brain when I tried to fall asleep.
2891198 That is what happens to me at times.
Oh, gosh, was very suspenseful with Dom taking care of that business and receiving his cut for it.
2894982 Yea decided to add a little action. Poor Sweetie and Starbloom had to see it though.
2894989 Indeed they did.
Suspenseful there for a moment, but I am glad everything is okay. However, I feel that isn't the last of the danger in store for Dom and the girls. Also, Starbloom levitating that little kid's toy back to him was so cute.
2911150 Yea I thought that would be nice, her giving him the toy back.
As for danger... Hehehehe
Dom's comment in the previous chapter about having lost friends makes me think that he used to be a soldier
welp so much for flipping tabes
3112515 *Nods* Does seem like that.
3112577 Hope that's a good thing.
More.
5876709 Mmm... yea I do need to get back to writing this one.
It's so bad, but so entertaining as well!
The writing quality isn't shit, like most trashy crossovers tend to be.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
14:39_24/10/2015
6563188 Thanks. I wrote it when bored but never really had any motivation to finish it.
Whenever I read this story, I have to think of the Lost Canyons track of Need for speed III Hot Pursuit for some reason
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It does kind of fit, the look and everything
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Yes
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You gonna update this thing or not?
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Hmm, I don't think I will. I really don't got motivation for this story. It was more of a theory.