I know many of you out there have read a lot of this Video Game crossovers Fanfics in this crazy technicolor world called Equestria. This is just another one of them. 'least this one has me as his hot and brave protagonist .
So one minute I was resting in the bed of my motel room and next I wake up in the middle of a forest and turned into a pony or some weird thing like that. Henry would laugh a lot if he saw me like this. Anyhoo, I managed to meet the rulers of this place and MAN they look GOOD! No idea why I'm feeling that way for a pony/horse thing but anyway.
They saw my totally cool style and awesomeness at fighting, so they got me a job. The gig: Hunt and capture the top ten most dangerous criminals of Equestria. Sounds easy, doesn't it?
How's that? Short and simple enough for ya? It's gonna be a long, hard road. But who knows? Could be Awesome. Could be dangerous. Could totally suck. Whadaya say, bro? Join me. Let's see how far we can take this.
I'm Travis Touchdown and No More Ponies: Equestrian Struggle starts now!!
Why does that weapon look so familiar?
2902001 Which one? Travis or Discord?
2902012Talking about the cover art.
2902033 It should that's blood berry.
2902191...what's it from? Because so far it isn't ringing any bells.
2902197 That's the default weapon for Travis in every no more heroes games to date.
2902199Oh, there's an actual No More Heroes game. Okay, my bad. That'd why I didn't recognize the name blood berry.
2902204 Wait... there's more than just the games
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2902204 You should check the game! It's pretty cool and very damn funny!
2902219How long ago did it come out? And is the replay value good? I'm slowly beating Ni No Kuni and Dragon's Dogma, and even if I do go and replay my old LoZ games for nostalgia sake, I'm going to run out of games soon.
Continue this awesome story!
INITIATE AWESOME DUBSTEP
2902234 It's actually kind of old, The first game came in 2007 and the second one on 2010. Both on Wii and the remakes with better graphics and bonus content in PS3. It takes a little to finish with all the optional jobs, collectibles and bonuses, so yeah! check it in Youtube so you can see if you like it.
2902260Yeah, I'll check it out.
2902249 Don't worry Doctor, I will
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Ps: A7X And Dubstep all together in harmony
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huh good story, but I still think you could have used no more hero's, instead of no more ponies in title, but keep it up.
2902809 Thank you for your kind words Doctor
SWEET! Also if you want to have people get an understanding for the series, I think 2 best friends are doing a let's play of No More Heroes 2 on their own channel. Great chapter, I'm really interested in seeing just who you pick to have fight. Keep goin and stay golden^^
2904366 Actually I already have an idea to get the 10 criminals, maybe more, that Travis is going to fight! And I can feel people is going to like it! But I'm not gonna tell it just now!
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i was planning on writing a No More Heroes crossover but i havent had time in a very long time to write.
anyways im kinda diggin' this but it just feels that Travis is not totally in character.
FUCKFACE
2904902 yeah i kinda felt it too but i will try to improve that, Don't worry! Sir Gipsy Motherfucker
And you there, with the fanfic page open right now, just click the first chapter. LET THE BLOODSHED BEGIN!
A No More Heroes crossover.
I would just like to say, briefly, FUCK YEAH!
Hah.
2907094 Finally Somepony got it!!!
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gipsy?
what are you? Trying to be different?
get back to fucking work
Sounds like an interesting concept.....Please do continue
2909684 With Pleasure
If I wasn't sure before, now I KNOW I need to play that game!
Travis worst enemy, a unicorn with a frying pan. Wished you've includes not the face!
Random 4th Wall breaking, Video game crossover stories are not my cup of tea, but I can say that you're doing fairly with with the first chapter.
Main character is good and written consistently pretty well.
The paragraphs are full of context.
Nice setting and premise of a plot.
That's about it.
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I can see this happing:
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Are we going to see some characters from other games like MadWorld/Anarchy Reigns and Killer7?
awesome nice discord and frying pane
If Sir Henry Mother Fucker dose not make an appearance I will be sad, but this is looking to be shaping up well, cant wait to see what kind of mayhem Travis causes.
Dude. Very nice chapter. I wish I had as much dedication as you.
Sponge bob referents. Your joking, your joking right
Ah Travis you just know how to talk to women, first mentioning Celestia's fat ass, then telling Twilight about now you killed your sister, and want to kill your brother before trying to hit on her, ya thats going to work for you.
2972580 Thank you very much, And Its not dedication, its just an insane mind and a lot of time on the internet
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What are your thoughts about the IRL chat with Travis and I in the chapter? I wanted to try something new, something that no one have done before and that came out!
2972587 Nope... I'm serious! Inspirations comes in the weirdest shapes doesnt it?
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I haven't really done it before, but it doesn't feel out of place.
2972618 That's exactly the idea! No one has done it before!! And believe me its funny to interact with the characters! Its the closest thing you will get to be like Pinkie!
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Indeed!
spongebob ref?
What? But I put $25.00 in the damn machine! I think it's broken...
And I wants moAr!
2972688 And you will, but it's going to take a little of time... you know, with the university been a dick and all
! It's my fault I wanted to be a lawyer!
2972684 The last part with shining armor is the spongebob ref, look magic conch shell in youtube!
2972716 my aunties a lawir in Florida so no biggie. But good story's Are addicting.
Me: ALL HAIL THE MAGIC CONCH! *Does Nothing*
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THE CONCH KNOWS ALL!!