• Member Since 7th Feb, 2013
  • offline last seen April 25th

Princess Glitzy


I'm a human being who writes stories about ponies.

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'Tis a tale of two ponies, living very different lives, who fall in love.













This was inspired by the song You'll Be In My Heart by Phil Collins.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 10 )

OMG! I totally loved this story! :fluttercry: I`m sorry, I just wanted this story to have a comment!

3026668 Thank you for enjoying the story! :heart:

3028188
Holy crap this story was great!:twilightoops:
Those were some major feels going on!:fluttercry:
And i love haikus:heart:
Good job!

3031539 Thank you for saying that! I like poetry, I`m not the best, but I try. Also, your user name reminds me of that song Stereo Hearts by Adam Levine. I have to go listen to that son now because it`s stuck in my head. Bye!

This was very cute! I hardly ever read poetry as fanfiction (not that there's an incredible amount on this site anyway), but this was still very touching.

I was going to mention that the story itself seemed a little bit fast-paced in the beginning, but then I realised that the lesson wasn't about them getting together, but about the bond they made and the trials they must overcome.

Regardless, you earned my like and favorite. Have a great day! :twilightsmile:

3044949 Thank you for enjoying it!

I don't see many stories structured in a cascading sequence of haiku, so +1 for originality. Choppy, but overall enjoyable.

And thus:

The salmon swim up
The hallway to my bedroom
Salmon and the moon

:twilightoops:

3556664 Thank you! I know that it may be a bit hard to read due to the format, but I'm glad that you enjoyed it! I wanted to challenge myself.

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