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Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy have known each other since they were young fillies. They started out as best friends and grew into something much deeper. But when the Wonderbolts call Dash away she realizes she needs to let Fluttershy go. Can she handle the choices Fluttershy has made or are the two destined to long for each other forever?
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Great story, it was very touching. I see that you put it as complete and I wish you would do a sequel but, still great job!
I enjoyed that. A rather interesting and unique story. As lilsprout said, I would like to see a continuation of this and see where it leads.
I enjoyed reading that alot. I agree with lilsprout: a sequel would be amazing. But still, nice work
I don't think I've seen a story like this before. This was really touching.
It is sad, indeed. A really original idea and I'm not sure if a sequel/next chapter is really needed. It would probably create some sort of happy ending which I'm not sure if I'd like to see here. I'm under the impression that the story would be best as a short one-shot, filled by emotions rather than events leading to a conclusion. I like this though and I'm tracking :)
I remember seeing this on deviant art, glad to see this here.
What does the quote in the picture say?
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I agree...kinda.
Part of me feels like it would be best to leave it as is, but another part wants to this from Fluttershy's perspective.
About a sequel, same thing. I kinda don't want a happy ending because it feels so right to have this forbidden affair going on in secret.
But then, I'm also curious to see what would happen if Applejack were to see Rainbow leaving out the window.
So basically, I can't really decide.
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Something always brings me back to you, it never takes too long.
Just wanted to thank everyone for the comments. It was meant to just be a short one-shot. I've thought about doing a sequel but I honestly kind of like it ending unresolved. I don't know that it would necessarily end well and I've written too many sad pony fics.
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Thanks.
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Very welcome! ^_^
Secret love... So sad...
Shame on you! You made me cry...
And made me to write my first comment ever here.
Very well done, anyway! And a sequel would be nice, but as a fanfiction writer (since almost 10 years) myself, I know that it don't NEED a sequel. It would be just nice ;)
622037 You can see it but I'm doing the most amazing happy dance right now. Thank you for the awesome compliment of your first comment.
623664 It was a pleasure ;)
Yikes. That's really pretty tragic.
I dunno what to say really. I enjoyed it, dark little thing that it was.
This is sad. I wish there was more.