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One year after Fluttershy overcomes her self-consciousness, she's prepared for the biggest challenge: telling Rainbow Dash how she really feels . . . what's the worst that could happen?

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Cute story, I'm glad it had a happy ending. Thumbs up! :raritywink:

i dident reely get it why was dash flying away?:derpyderp2::derpyderp1:

cute story i like it :pinkiesmile:

I like the ending because it just seems like such a Rainbow Dash thing to do. :rainbowlaugh:

An upvote and a favourite for you!
Sincerely,
ChrisTheCat

Before I read this, I have to say that this picture is major D'aww.

~4 minutes later~

Pretty good...but you left out letters here and there, and sometimes you missed entire words, leaving us to guess.

"It made Fluttershy if Rainbow was one day going to abandoned her friends."
"Fluttershy's wings was stuck and was unable to fly away."
"including inside store leaving angry ponies chasing after them."
"Dash could feel her eyes against her"

For that last one, I keep imagining Fluttershy's eyes out of their sockets being held by Dash.

But...ignore my rambling criticism and bask in the glow of other happy comments! :pinkiehappy:

I really love that feeling you get when you hit the like button and can see the dislike bar drop down as the ratio of likes to dislikes increases
Am I alone in this or do other people like that feel?

I read the title and thought of a song I heard once that would go perfectly with this. You, my friend, get a like.

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