Love can be where you least expect it. It could be right in front of you, it could just swoop down and catch you by surprise, it could jump at you from your enemy. Or it could be you polar opposite.
Chapters (4)
- Member Since 1st Apr, 2012
- offline last seen April 6th
Swift Gale
Just here to read and write in my free time in between streaming, working, and going to college.
Swift Gale
Joined 1st Apr, 2012 ·
Offline
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Stats
Page generated in 0.098 seconds
Total duration
1,071 users online
2,081,185 hits today, 2,054,621 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Nice ill see where this goes:hear
t:
ummm....
Good but a little bit rushed
For anyone that says it's rushed, can you give me a break? I'm new here and I'm already writing a story on fanfiction.net, but the difference is that I wrote that one out and I'm making this one up on the fly. Anyways, everyone thank you for your opinions so far.
Sure, they jumped out with their feelings a little abruptly, but it seemed well-written enough.
It's one of those short-and-sweet stories that doesn't blow your entire day up!
Does anyone get how I got the war raging in their heads idea from?
*anypony
:D you used me picture as cover ~yay
The battle in heads sounds more like Bleach than anything. Also look at my stories, the seceret to them is I make them up as I write. You've seen my outlines on first chapters then seen the actual things. I make up over half of them on the go. But it's a pretty good bassis. You could have done better but at least you have more than four people like your story.
I just came up with it right out of the blue, but now that you mention it, it does sound like its from Bleach.
waaa cliffhangers
476199 Sorry, but I couldn't wait to put that chapter up any longer.
No! Unfair! You can't stop with out telling at least all the realationships!
Lolwut
Hmmm, okay I'll stop bugging you... for now. Give yourself a mustache
10 out of 5
This is a good story
Not the best cliffhanger I have seen, but i do want to see the ending.
Moar please.
1240608 I will add more when I have more time. I promise.
OH MY GOSH!! I LOVE IT!!