Rainbow Crash has not been in Ponyville for more than 4 days, and she is invited to one of Pinkie Pie's crazy parties! Normally, she would be excited, until she shows up to find the one absolute pony she hates! How is she supposed to have fun tonight when all she could think about is when this mare was going to leave? And how Pinkie kept ranting about this silly game she's not interested in?And then later through the night, other things... Come.
(used with a OC created by theviciouskiller)
Chapters (4)
Her name is rainbow dash
2888221 If I am to understand, her OC is named Rainbow Crash.
2888228It is, and thank you.
Whats up with the four dislikes?!
Maybe you should note that fact in the description.
2888798 Um,look at the character bar.
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I meant that they probably mistook it even with the OC icon. I mean I know that she is Rainbow Crash because of how her body color is brown not blue and she is mad at Rainbow dash for some reason. Some people don't look back at what they read to comprehend. I did so myself so I didn't get confused like the first poster. I mean note it in the story description like Rainbow Crash is a OC not the insult name given to Rainbow Dash. Just a suggestion, I mean I was explaining why people might have disliked because they didn't understand and downvoted in their confusion.
The story is interesting. I think I know why she may hate Dash, but I am surprised they didn't ask what Dash did to Crash to make her not like Dash so vehemently. Oh well the plot thickens...
People also dislike and don't say anything to help you make the story better or critique. I'd maybe read it through to see how natural it sounds. There are some parts that could be written a tad better.
'Tis good! I enjoyed it, and hope to read more.
2888878 I agree. Some parts in there could use a touch up. I'll see on working on that.
hey pretty good I liked it this will be a very good story, I hope you make many more chapters and never give up, also, check out my story "A friend to the end" if you ever get a chance, and if you do please review and let me know how it is, and also please favorite if you liked it tell me what you thought, and again, good story.
3019492 Thank you, Jeremy1555. I've been getting so many dislikes from this, it's insane. And there are only two reasons.
1. It might be because the people who read this arn't fans of the OC collection.
main reason 2. Because in the story, Rainbow Crash hates Rainbow Dash.( for now, that is *wink*)
Any who, again thank you.
~theviciouskiller
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Okay, unless Crash turns out to be a failed attempt to clone Rainbow Dash, then this animation fits all too well.